Hà Nội: Mời các bố mẹ HỌC TIẾNG ANH ONLINE cùng Mrs. ThuyED (^_^)

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  1. Kim Lien E52

    Kim Lien E52 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em là Nguyễn Thị Kim Liên, E52, gửi Cô Witing thứ 2 (hạn nộp 03.9.2011).
    The chart below the number of the members taking part in different sports activities at Santon Sports Club from 1995 to the present day.
    Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
    The line graph reveals the quantity of club to attend in sports: racquet sports, swimming, fitness classes, circuit training at Santon Sports Club from 1995 to the present day.
    It can be clearly seen that the time period shown in the graph was from 1975 to the present day. The subject of the chart was club quantity join in different activities. The levels of the participation in racquet sports decreased. The quantity of participation in racquet sports was the biggest than that in swimming, fitness classes and circuit training in 1990. However, there has fallen with the greatest decline in the present day. By contrast, the level of participation in circuit training and fitness classes increased. The quantity of participation in circuit training has been the largest rise in the present day. The level of participation in swimming stabled. The level of fluctuation in swimming maintained from 250 to 300. Although, the quantity of participation in circuit training was less than that in swimming in 1990, the quantity of participation in both circuit training and swimming was same as in 2000.
     
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  2. pichu pichu

    pichu pichu Thành viên tập sự

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    Em : Yến Chi, E52, nộp bài writing task 1:
    The line graph compares an amount of participants joining in various sports activities at Santon Sports Club from 1995 to current day. It can be clearly seen that the main trend in graph is the fluctuation in the volume of members over the period.
    In 1990, racquet sports had the largest participants of four sports, at 300 people. During the period 1995 to present day, the most considerable deterioration has been in the number of members who play it. It has plummeted from 300 to just under 150. In contrast, in 1990, a quantity of people joining in fitness classes was the lowest but over the period, it has moved upward markedly with over 100 people. Similarly, the greatest jump has been in a volume of people taking in circuit training and now it has the most numerous members of four sports. On the other hand, an amount of joiners of swimming club has fluctuated slightly. It was flatting from 1990 to 1995 followed by the slight climb over a 5 year period and it has dropped again from 2000 up to now. Besides, in 2000, the swimming club and circuit training have the same number of members .
    Generally, Numbers of club participants attending in otherwise sports activities from 1990 to the present day has change significantly.
     
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  3. mother&child

    mother&child Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Hồng Trang E49 nộp bài ạ.
    http://www.mediafire.com/?e8a2bdcrbvyko4o
    http://www.mediafire.com/?e9mju3c96wznt34
    http://www.mediafire.com/?4ogh6b75248ouqu
    Speaking 1: Talking about personnal preferences.
    1/ Do you prefer watching TV or listening to the radio?
    I prefer watching TV but if I don't like the show or I get bored I switch from watching TV to listening to the radio. I think watching TV and listening to the radio are both fun and entertaining.
    2/ Do you like sending letter or text message to your friend?
    Definantly text message. My handwriting is atrocious, and it's so much easier and faster to just text message someone...and I don't have to buy a stamp either.
    3/ Which do you prefer talking to people on the phone or talking face to face?
    I prefer talking face to face. Because face-to face communication are truely important and basicly, we need face-to face communication, and that is the most directive way of express the emotions and we can feel and see any feelings throuth it, we can speak faster than we can type or write, so the untrue ways such the telephone and e-mail is less than it although they are convenience.
    4/ Do you buying things in shop or buying on the internet?
    I like to buy online, but just if I know excactly what I want to buy. Especially buying things that I can't get in shops . I think it is convenient for people to buy what they want online. Although sometimes the goods you bought are not so good just as you imagined.

    Speaking 2: Describe some exciting news that you heard or read about.
    Alright, I may be saying this too soon but I'm really excited about this so I think I'll share it with all of you. I read the daily newspaper in this morning. It gives many interesting news. The exciting news that I am going to talk about here is on Global warming. I read it in the editorial section of the paper. The editor has presented the article in a very nice way. It caught my attention because global warming is a burning issue these days. The whole globe is involved in it.
    The way the editor wrote about the cause and effects was very eye catching. It was an eye-opener of me. We humans are the cause and we humans only can lessen it. The editor also how the pollution caused by cutting trees, having more industries, growing number of cars and other human luxurious is leading to global warming. Then he told about effects of global warming. There are three main effects. Firstly, there is rising sea level. Secondly, we are having longer summers and extreme climates that is to say that the summers are hotter and the winters are colder. Finally, we are having epidemics of diseases like malaria and dengue.
    The new article also told how we can lessen this phenomenon by simple measures like not cutting down trees, planing more trees, using recycled meterials and saying no to plastic bags.
    I felt very enlightened after reading this news. I'm hoping to get it out as soon as possible so that I can get some feedback on it from all of you.
     
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  4. quangduce51

    quangduce51 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Quang Đức E 51 nộp bài Writing Task 2 "Mobile Telephones"

    Topic :
    Mobile telephones have brought many benefits but they have also had negative effects.
    Do the disadvantages of having mobile phones outweigh the advantages ?
    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

    Learning how to use technology effectively in their work and life is essential for all people. Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that mobile telephones have brought many benefits but they have also had negative effects.
    There are several obvious advantages, such as rapid and convenient for communication, job and entertainment. First of all, mobile phones help our communication easier. Everyone can contact with others wherever they live and whenever they want. For example, they can simply get in touch with their family and friends by calling or sending messages everywhere without electricity or cables. Another positive aspect is that people can use cell phones for career such as using email, organizing daily works or planing meetings and duties . Finally, mobile phones are not only telephones but also devices which are installed many useful software applications. For instance, people can take pictures, listen to music, play games, access internet etc… on them.
    However, the impact has not all been positive, they have also had negative effects. The most common criticism is that they spreads electromagnetic radiations which are harmful to human’s eyes, nervous and immune system. In some cases, they cause health problems such as tiredness, headache and loss of concentration, especially in cancer. In addition, another negative effect is that cell phones also contribute to increase accidents because of the lack of focus on taking part in traffic. A final drawback is that the sound which emanates from headphones connected with mobile phone is very bad for the ears, even causes tinnitus.
    To sum up mobile telephones have many useful benefits but on the other hand, they may cause several serious problem. After careful consideration of the above reasons, I, personally, stand on the side of the advocates of their advantages. In conclusion, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and they make our lives more comfortable and convenient.

    The End.
     
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  5. long1990

    long1990 Thành viên tập sự

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  6. lazymeo

    lazymeo 019 99 00 99 00

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    Em oánh dấu tiếp .
     
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  7. truongjange51

    truongjange51 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Trường Giang E51 nạp bài chị nhe'!
    Sau một thời gian mất ăn, thiếu ngủ vật vã cuối cùng cũng xong (có gì chị cứ thẳng tay chém jup em nhé để lần sau em sửa lỗi):)
    Trung Thu rùi chúc chị và đại gia đình E 51 vui vẻ nha!


    Along with the development of society, mobile telephones are increasingly popular use by utilities that it brings to our jobs and lives. However, besides the use of mobile telephones also have disadvantages.

    There are many obvious benefits, such as with a mobile telephone you can connect with friends, colleagues and family at anytime and anywhere as long as there are waves of the network device you're using. This is the first utility and the largest of mobile telephone that gives us. Another positive aspect is the development of technology, your mobile is equipped many useful features like camera, games, music player and news updated daily. Moreover, mobile telephones pretty small can replace functions of a key with home, cars or function of a smart card to manage your accounts and it help to make transactions with the bank.

    The impact has not all been positive, the result of the development technology are invented the expensive and sophisticated mobile telephones, to own those phones we have to spend much money for them but instead we can use them in other more useful purposes. Another negative effect is the impact of electromagnetic waves to our bodies. If we use the mobile telephone constantly with long talk time that can affect our ear, brain. Typically the headache, stress… A final drawback is the phone use while driving mau cause loss of focus and the cause of several serious accidents.

    In sum up, although mobile has drawbacks, but we must admit that this is a technological leap is useful for work and everyday life of us. in conclution, I believe the attention to the limitations of mobile phones can help us understand more fully about these things personally.
     
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  8. trangneu

    trangneu Bắt đầu tích cực

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    Em Mai Trang E52 Nộp bài writing task 1


    The line graphs illustrate an amount of members who join in many types of sports at Santon Sport Club from 1995 to the current day. The statistics show that the main trend is a fluctuation of the quantity of participants. Nevertheless, not all sports have the same attraction.
    Circuit training and racquet sports line have contrast trend. In 1990, the racquet sports were the leading sport subject with about 300 members. But since 1995, there has fallen 50 percent from 280 to 140 peoples in nowadays and has been turned into the third popular sport in Santon Club. Meanwhile, the circuit training has keep its jump ahead of racquet sports. It has picked up from 160 in 1990 to 290 members in the current day and become the first favourite sport.
    On the other hand, the numbers of people who join in swimming has erratically fluctuated over the period. This has collapsed slightly since 1995 with the numbers is 250 and moved upward slowly since 2000 with the same participants . However, it doesn’t give any big chance and has still kept the second position among four sport activities. In 1990, a quantity of peoples who take part in fitness classes was the lowest but up to now, it has moved upward markedly with over 100 people.

    Generally speaking the diagram provides information about the shifts in the sport popularity throught the numbers of club members joining at Santon club from 1995 to the current day. The line graphs show that, circuit training takes the top from racquet sports.
     
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  9. thuha236

    thuha236 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Thu HÀ_E49 nộp bài c nhé :D
    1. What are newspapers like in your country?
    Well to be honest, in general I would say that In my country, there are three basic kinks. They are: daily, weekly and online newspapers. The daily and online kinds are more popular than weekly one. In addition to this newspapers have been grown in both quantity and quality.
    2. Tell me some of the rules about talking that children in your country learn, such as when they can talk and when they can’t?
    I suppose I would have to maintain that In VietNam, it is essential for children to be polite, so we teach them to say “ please, thank you” when they talk to other people, especially the elder. Something else that I need to comment on is that in a classroom, if they want to speak something, they have to raise their hands and wait to the teacher’s permission . And I shouldn’t forget to mention that they are also taught that it is rude to interrupt people, they must to wait their turn.
    3. What effects do you think using computers could have on children’s writing skills?

    Well you know, I think it really effects on their handwriting skills. The point I’d like to begin with is that nowadays, children use the Internet a lot, therefore they depend on it and they are lazy to think when they write. As well as that I could say that if the children only write e- mail, their E might not be so good because they use the computer’s spell check.
    http://www.mediafire.com/?gqjyk4f3ibyyf01
     
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  10. lenhan.tcnh

    lenhan.tcnh Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Lê Thanh Nhàn. E52 .nôp writting test 1
    topic : the chart below shows the number of members taking part in differnt sports activities at Santon sports club from 1990 to present day

    The graph reveals information about members quantity join in various sports operation from 1990 to present day at Santon Sports Club. It can be clearly that the trends jump but not at all .
    Over the previous five days, there has been a climb in people figures who have played circuit training. It was leaped steadily over the years, from 160 to 290. Amount of participants fitness classes also pick up about 120, with the strongest increase in 2000.
    Meanwhile, there was a slump in racquet sports ,with the biggest drop by 90,from 290 to 200. After sliding ,since 1995 there has been gradually rocket tends. In swimming sports were gently fluctuated around a level from 250 to 290. It is predicted that this sports will become more and more people involve in present day.
    Overall amount of members passionate about varied sport will steadily shoot up in the future.
     
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  11. thuy_ed

    thuy_ed Thành viên tích cực

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    Mình vừa gửi trả lớp E49 toàn bộ bài chữa Writing đợt 4, cả lớp check nha
     
  12. buininh1810

    buininh1810 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em là Bùi Thị Ninh - Lớp E52. Em gửi chị bài Writing task 1 ạ
    The line graph compares the variousness of the quantity of people participating in sports operations over the past 20 years at Santon Sports Club. It can be clearly seen that the members taking part in this club go up quickly. However, not all sports activities have become more popular.
    From 1990 to the present day, the most remarkable jump has been in amount of members of circuit traning – this has risen by almost two times, from 160 to 290 numbers, first and foremost the biggest leap over the period 1990 to 2000. There has also been a pick up 100 people joining in fitness classes with an increase from 120 to 220 members.
    In contrast, the numbers of club members participating in racquet sports has taken a nosedive. In 1990, it was the most popular at Santon Sports Club and now it is the least common. In addition, amount of swimmers has fluctuated during this period with 245 people in 1990, climbing to 270 members in 2000 and then dropping 250 members in the present day.
    Generally the report shows different changes in quantity of members taking part in sports activities at Santon Sports Club.
    Chúc chị những ngày nghỉ lễ zui zẻ!
     
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  13. apple13

    apple13 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Trần Minh Đức - E52 nộp bài writing task 1 ạ


    The line graph compares people’s participation in four kinds of sport activity at Santon Sport Club from 1995 to present. It can be clearly seen that the number of members joining in these sports tends to move upward.
    As it is mentioned above, fitness classes attracted a sharply increasing number of people during the period 1995-2000, from 150 to above 200. Since then, it has climbed gradually and stays at about 220 now. Similarly but more significantly, the graph also reveals the leap of circuit training in quantity. From 200 members in 1995, it has reached the peak of approximate 300 members in the club.
    On the other hand, it is illustrated that fewer people have joined in racquet sports. It has dropped dramatically from over 200 in 1995 to under 150 at present, the bottom point of the graph.
    Unlike these three sports, the number of people taking part in swimming has fluctuated since 1995. It got a slight improvement at about 270 in 2000 before slowing down to 250 at present, the same as it was in 1995.
    In conclusion, it is shown that the number of people taking part in sport activities at Santon Sport Club has changed variably since 1995.
     
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  14. hoangsim812

    hoangsim812 Thành viên tập sự

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    em là nguyễn huy hoàng e 52 nộp bài writing task 1
    The chart show that the amount of people who participate in various sport activities at Saton Sport Club from 1995 to nowadays.
    The line graphs reveal the quantity of people who join in 4 sports :racquet sport, swimming, fitness classic, circuit training.It can be clearly seen that the number change in half of decade
    In 1995 the number of people who join in fitness classic are 150 at bottom.It roket from 1995 to 2000, but it rise slowly from 2000 to present day.Similarly circuit training have high jump during 1995 to 2000 and drop slightly between 2000 and present day.
    In contrast racquet sports have steady decline during the period 1995 to present day the the people take part in decrease from 200 to 140
    Besides the number of people who join in swimming are slight fluctuate.In 1995 the number equal its in nowadays are 250.
    Nowadays circuit training have the most people participation,the number are 300.However amount of people play racquet sports at least 140.


    thứ 2 này không bắt kịp xe ra hà nội học rồi :)
     
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  15. thuytranghvnh

    thuytranghvnh Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Nguyễn Thị Thùy Trang-E52 –Nộp bài Writing task 1
    Topic: The chart below shows the number of members taking part in different sports activities at Santon Sports Club from 1995 to the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

    The line graph compares the quantity of people participating in polymorphous sport operations at Santon sports club from 1995 to the present day. It can be clearly seen that the surge in certain sports but not all have become more attractive.
    Over two decades, circuit training and fitness classes have enchanted more participants such as a dramatic climb of 50 percent from over 100 people in 1990 to over 200 people at present of fitness and over 150 people in 1990 to nearly 300 people at this time in circuit training which today possesses more members than in any other activity at the club.
    In contrast, during the same period there has been a plunge in the amount of individuals attending in racquet sports; this has markedly slumped from nearly 300 members in 1990 to nearly 150 at present, estimated about 50 per cent.
    In other hand, people going swimming at this have risen and fallen erratically. In 1990, there were 250 and five following years the players collapsed slightly. After that, however the increase was suddenly about 30 members from 1995 to 2000 and in recent days the swimmer figure has fallen back again to the same number of member in 1990.
    Generally speaking that at Santon club the various sports have different development trends so the change of totality people joining in each operation is not similar.
     
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  16. fluently

    fluently Thành viên tập sự

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    em Nguễn Đình Luân lớp E52 nộp bài task 1:


    The line graph compare past 15 year at santom sports club in number of participants who join in vertain sports activities. It can be clearly seen that the number of people play in racquet sports was downwards while the rest was tend to upward or fluctuation.
    Over the period, the most significant stable has been in the participants of people who play swimming. Although in 2000 it was erratic, in the early period and late period it have it achieved equal value.
    However, it was really incredible growth for circuit training. It rises by 130 from the beginning to the end of the period. Similarly it jumped by 100 in fitness classes. Both of them had the highest growth in the period from 1995 to 2000.
    Incontrast it has dropped of almost 140 since 1990. the most significant decrease was in 1995. It has slided 90 within 5 years. It's from sport has many players in the 1990 became less people in present.
    This ends my report here!
     
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  17. lyhua

    lyhua Thành viên tập sự

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    em Nguyễn Thị Lý lớp E52 nộp bài task 1


    The line graph reveals the differences about the number of participants immersing sports movements at Santon Sports Club from 1995 to the present day. It can be obviously seen that the quantity of people who being involve in the fitness classes and the circuit training has surged; that of the racquet sports and the swimming has had a significant plunge and has fluctuated in during that time.
    Firstly, today is less attractive in the racquet sports than in 1990. The number of people playing the racquet sports reached the peak at nearly 300 in all of sports academics in 1990. However, it has plummeted in this period and has had a half crash. It can be shown that it falls the almost under 150 in nowadays.
    In contrast, there has been a steady upward trend in the number of bulks getting involved in the fitness classes and circuit training. They took off at 100 and 150 respectively in 1990. At the moment, participants enroll in circuit training touch the highest at nearly 300 and that of fitness classes arranges in the third.
    Finally, most people that joined in the swimming has fluctuated around 250. Therefore, it reached the peak in 2000.
    In conclusion, the graph can be shown that there had been a sharp change in the popularity of various sports between 1990 and the present day at Stanton Sports Club.
     
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  18. linhchiE52

    linhchiE52 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Linh Chi lớp E52 nộp bài Writing task 1 ạ :confused:

    The line graph compares amount of members join to dissimilar sports actions at Santon Sports Club from 1995 to the present day. It can be clearly seen that there has been a surge in number of people participating. Meanwhile, not all sports in club become more poplular.

    Over the period, there have had two athletics which were upwards. It was circuit training and fitness classes. The first has shooted up by approximately 150 people and the second has soared about 100 people. From 1990 to 2000, members of two sports have rocketed dramatically but from 2000 to present day, they have recovered slowly, with an increase from 205 to 225 people entering fitness classes.

    In contrast, regarding to racquet sports, there has been a marked deterioration. In 1990 it was the sport which had the hightest members taking part in with nearly 300 people.However, from this year to nowadays, it has countinuting going down.Today, the fingures only are less than 150. The total of people attending swimming have risen and fallen erratically – 250 people in 1990, sliding slightly to about 240 in 1995 and then climbing to 275 in 2000 finally it has dived to 250 in present day.

    Generally speaking, it is obvious that the most of sports have a jump, but racquet sports have a free – fall and swimmers have no change gradually. Nowadays, amount of people playing activities are all more than 100.
     
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  19. linhchiE52

    linhchiE52 Thành viên tập sự

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    anh Tâm ( đen ) lớp E52 chưa biêt post bài nhờ e gửi hộ ạ hehe_ Writing Task 1
    The line graph shows the figure of people who played various sports

    activities at Santo sports Club from 1995 to the present day. As can be

    clearly seen that this numbers had a change over the period.

    There was a regular increase in the figure of members taking part

    in not only fitness classes but also circuit training. In fact, the amount of

    members practiced fitness classes climbed significantly from approximately

    125 to over 200 between 1990 and 2000. Similarly, in that time, there was a

    considerable jump in the number of members participating in circuit training

    from over 150 to more and less 275.

    In contract, 150 has been known as a result of deterioration in the

    figure of members participating in racquet sports during ten years (1990 –

    2000) then continued its downward trend to reach lowest at under 150 in the

    present day. Besides, the amount of swimmers was quite stabile from 1990

    to the present day, except a small sharp rise in 2000.
     
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  20. aloneinthedark

    aloneinthedark Banned

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    em Nguyễn Quốc Thắng lớp Ẹ 52 nộp bài task 1


    The line graph compares quantity of people attending in various sports activities at Santon Sports Club from 1995 to the present day. It can be clearly seen that the main trends of the graph rise and fall erratically over this period. However, total people participating in sports activities over 20 years haven’t changed.
    Over the period, number of people paying racquet sport which has the biggest reduction has fallen by almost 50 people, from 200 peoples in 1995 to 150 people in the present day. In contrast, the most marked going up has been amount of people who take part in circuit training with an increase from 220 to 290 people during 16 years. Beginning with the second position in popular sports , it grew up to the first in now day. On other hand, there has been a gradually jump in quantity of people attending fitness classes. Meanwhile, number of swimmer has gone up slightly during the period. This rose slowly from 250 to 270 peoples before falling to 260 peoples in the present day.
     
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