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  1. thuytranghvnh

    thuytranghvnh Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Nguyễn Thị Thùy Trang-E52 nộp bài Writing:

    Topic: Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air.
    What are these problems and how might they be reduced ?

    Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that environment contamination in term of land, water and air. There are a lot of reasons which lead to the pollution and the human are trying to find out the solution to surmount it.
    It can be said that land where we live, use is being narrowed and devastated dangerously. Some of the causes are very the soil erosion, deforestation, building in rural areas, litter on the street and land-find sites full of rubbish. To gain aims, people have carried out many things of which destroy directly or indirectly our land. However it is not be able to not refer to objective factors in annulling the land such as drought, flood, storms and volcanoes. From these things, individuals and organization are striving to improve the troubles. It can be producing biodegradable things or charging polluting factories high taxes or reducing waste, recycling rubbish and refusing to give planning permission for new buildings.
    Water also plays an important part in human life since 70 percent of the world surface is water, especially we may not eat for many days but a lack of water is impossible. Consequently that the problems in water are always felt a lasting sting smart for people society. With the contaminated rivers, acid rain, flood and drought, water is becoming dirty and carrying many diseases. Furthermore, melting ice cap makes the water unusable due to the salinization. Recognizing these matter, people rend many ways to tackle for example issuing regular to prevent business from discharging sewage, using renewable form of energy not only from water, planting more trees.
    Finally even if the air we breathe is not fresh and clear. Every day a great deal of smog and toxic fume from factories, means of transportation is eliminated outside. In addition, the greenhouse gases and global warming also contribute large part to in this. May be the helpful things we do to deal with these troubles is to make more fuel-efficient cars with less polluting engines, use more often public transport and turn off electrical appliance when they are no longer in use.
    There no denying that our society is developing dizzily but enclosing it being many family ties as people face with critical trouble with environmental pollution. There was many methods generated but the most important thing is the perception of every one. “Do not only say, please act”. I believe that our surrounding is fresher, cleaner and better.


    Ah!Thưa cô bài Speaking của em ở trang 81 ạ, cô nhớ chưa luôn cho em luôn nha cô!:D
     
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  2. phuongdung_tran

    phuongdung_tran Thành viên tập sự

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    em Dung e51 gửi bài writing task 2 ạ

    In our time and age, much debate has taken place about whether the billionaires or millionaires feel happy with their wealth. It is believed that having lots of money can make our life become a tropical paradise where people are worry about nothing and just enjoy happiness. However, people’s satisfaction depends on how they definite their pleasure, so, there is also a contrast conception that money cannot bring us all things.
    A fact that everyone cannot deny is money make people miserable. There are two reasons supporting this view. Firstly, from my own perspective, the rich men almost have no real friends. Because of losing in business, they do not have time to discover the good characters of people and concentrate on the partners giving them benefits instead. In another hand, spare time is absolutely luxurious for the rich ones as they must ensure the fortune, even multiply it. Therefore, the billionaires only sleep comfortably four hours per day in average, when being sure that the banking account’s numbers are raising hour by hour and a net of alarms are set up around their villas.
    It also might be noted that having lots of money help people be happy. Yet I am one of the people who feel that proudness is also a part of happiness. Indeed we are certainly going to be so excited to have luxurious things, such as: Rolex watch, Louis Vuiton’s handbag or Dior’s coat… in front of admiring looks due to money. Moreover, the rich men may use money to carry out their indulgences, which also explains why valuable papers bring us happiness. The Vietnamese tycoon Quoc Cuong, for example, is keen on auto collection, so the time on which he can get a Lamborghini is considered as a happy moment in his life.
    From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that money brings us both stressful and cheery hours. Because money is just a paying instrument, do not let it control our life. In conclusion, the person knowing how to use money efficiently and be satisfied with the wealth he has got will be able to smile truly.


    chị ơi tuần này em lại ốm rùi, cứ thay đổi thời tiết là sốt chị ạ >.<, xong lại máu me tham gia hoạt động linh tinh nữa. Em toàn bị mama mắng ý:p. chị cho em xin bài tập tuần 8/10 chị nhé, chứ nghỉ học nhiều lại nộp phạt nữa thì chít hihi...
     
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  3. aloneinthedark

    aloneinthedark Banned

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    em Nguyễn Quốc Thắng nộp bài task 2 ạ:


    as one of the most important inventions of the 20th century, polluted environment has a wide application in all aspects of ourlives. the disastrours issues of environment such as polluted air, water and land that are now feature of our daily.
    firstly, quaility of water is being affected seriously by the human activities.. industrial activities and life activities are the main reason for polluting water because the untreated sewage discharge into the rivers, lakes and ocean. heavy metal in the sewage can destroy fish, aquatic animal and ecosystem so that it becomes the contaminated river, exemple Vedan company has polluted Thi Vai river for 10 years. In the ocean, the exploitation of oil is very dangerous for marine environment, exemple the oil spill in the Mexico bay in the USA. However, the governments in the countries and international organization are looking for solutions to improve environmental water in the each country and all over the world. For examples, the government charges polluting factories high taxes and process waste water before discharging into river.

    Secondly, it might also be noted that the environmental air is polluted. The exhaust fumes froms the industrial factories in the development countries is the main reason to contaminate air. In addition, increasing of vehicles in the big cities also give a large of smog and dust into the atmosphere. The toxic gases of exhaust gases of the factories cause the acid rain, which can destroy ecosystem in water, plants ,construction and cause diseases for people. In other hands, CO2 and other greenhouse gases from industrial activities is responsible for warning global. People must do something to reduce greenhouse gases and other toxic gases by some solutions, exemples : use renewable form of energy such as wind or solar energy, use public transport more often,…

    Finally, there is a futher more subtle point we must consider pollution of land. Soil erosion is the process by which material is removed from the a region of the Earth’s surface as a result of flooding and deforesting. That’s the reason why the plants can not grow in this region,people can not cultivate and it becomes the dead land. The solution to this problem is that people could plant more trees.

    Based on the above discussion and analysis, we can see that the environmental problems is very serious and people must conduct these solution to improve current state of the environment of air, water and land.
     
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  4. nomark912

    nomark912 Thành viên mới

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    em Quốc Khánh E 51 nộp bài chị nhé

    Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that the connection between wealth and happiness. A part of people suppose that being rich doesn’t mean that people have all of things. Especially happiness . However, some one claims that having much money will bring you beatitude. From my own perspective, everything has a good side and a bad side, and being rich is no exception.

    We may look into every possible reason; however, foremost reason for this is that having a lot of money makes people miserable. Firstly, people who have a lot of money don’t have the reason to work hard and get on in life. It is due to rich people have enough money to buy all luxurious thing, drive on a super cars and live in expensive villas. They don’t have to work because it will make no difference to their lives. Life will become very boring and meaning less. Secondly, it is hard for rich people have close friends so that they cannot share their sadness and happiness with anybody.

    The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that well-being in some case actually can brings them exhilaration. Firstly, there is no doubt that wealthy people have a more good physical life than the middle-class and poor. They have chance to access the best education, health care method, latest modern technology. In addition, with their strong potential finance, they can easily go anywhere over the world to discover wonderful natural, cultures and do exciting activities. Finally, They can use money in a more meaningful way by establish the charitable funds to help hunger and poverty people such as the billionaire Bill Gate . Consequently, they are respected by everybody.


    From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that wealth is one of many ways to creat happiness but it doesn’t mean having much money must guarantee cheerfulness.
     
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  5. okita273

    okita273 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Nhâm e 51 nộp bài ạ. (Thực ra em là Duyên, nộp bài hộ chị Nhâm ạ) ^^


    Along with the rapid development of society, more and more issues are brought to our attention, one of which is the relationship between wealth and happiness. Nowadays happiness is a very popular word but each of us can define "happiness" differently. Some people argue that without wealth you can not be happy. However, I do strongly support the idea that there are obviously a number of positive and negative aspects of wealth, which may either make our life happy, or take this happiness away.
    It is undoubtedly true that people with money have beautiful things and they are usually admired, because everyone would like to be at their place. For instance, they can afford having an amazing house, afford eating out in fabulous restaurant and having absolutely outstanding holidays. In other words, they can cheer themselves up with material things. Moreover, they can help sick people and give them happiness. Therefore, wealth can bring joy especially if they share it with others. What is also worth noticing is that when they have money, they can learn many skills such as learning how to playing tennis, golf…. Furthermore, they can visit every country in the world and see any planet.
    Despite the amount of material benefits, some extremely rich, wealthy and famous people are unhappier than what we would expect them to be. A study conducted by University of Illinois indicated that more than 30 percent of the richest people in America were not as happy as the person who earned a modest income. There are numerous reasons to explain this fact, and I would explore a few of the most important ones here. We can not forget a universal truth that one of the main gates to happiness is to stay healthy. Maybe some people think that when one is rich, he can be healthy or it does not matter even if they have diseases because these rich men have lots of money to pay their medication. This is totally wrong as good health is acquired from a healthy lifestyle progressively and not in a day. With lots of money we are tend to temp ourselves to exotic, luxurious food. If this food is taken excessively, it will let to obesity, heart diseases, diabetes, hypertension and other serious illness. Thus, wealth can not bring happiness. It might also be noted that even though rich people do not have to worry about affording basics, they do worry about loosing the wealth they have acquired. There is a further more subtle point we must consider that rich people might become mean and selfish since they often feel that they are special and better than other people. That is why other people do not want to spent time with them. To make matters worse, they may often gain dishonest “friends”, who only love the person’s money, not themselves. As a result, some rich people die alone, without their families and friends.
    From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that wealth can bring happiness but only partly. We can be poor, but happy. We should think what is the most important in life. In my opinion, family, health, love and friends are the most important things bringing happiness. Even million dollars will not replace them.
     
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  6. HanaKim

    HanaKim Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Trần Như Hoa E49 nộp writing task 2 ạ :

    Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is the throwing away perfectly good products in order to replace them with more up-to-date models of rich people. In recent years, the world have been witnessed the fastest development of the producing goods industry although there are several opinions about it drawbacks. From my own perspective, environmental disadvantages of this development do not outweigh the economic advantages.

    There are several obvious benefits, the most inevitable truth is that rich people are giving the biggest impetus for the industry by their habits- using latest models of products. These rapid changes can be considered as a massive boost in economy's creativity and innovation. This habit created a great demand in the market for a better product. For instance in the producing mobile phone field, a normal phone has integrated some basic features like calling and sending message. But nowaday, if manufacturer only bring about a cell phone with the feature like that, obviously, they could not sell their good largely. It is due to the fact that not only the wealthy but also other people want to listen to music, write email, access internet, take photo, play games and watch videos by a normal cell phone. That is why new smart phone usually release the latest series of phone even with unique features as video phone and GPS- the global positioning systems to give the position instructions for people wherever they are. And if all the people usually use their items for a long time till they are ruined, the industry may get worsen and collapsed. There is no doubt that the expanding of our economic based mainly on the the rich’s habit and that it is really a stimulus for the trade. In addition, this routine can create jobs for many people and advance technology will be improve quickly overtime. Moreover, the perfectly good but old products can be sold to poorer people with a cheap price. Our global economy will be greatly benefited by this consuming tradition.

    The impact has not been positive. Because the fact that people in society often throw away perfectly good products can lead to some problems for the environment. The more goods are produced, the more natural resources are lost. The number of waste will be increased and the environment will be polluted seriously. According to the Environmental Protection Agency (EPA), the total cost of municipal waste disposal is $100 per ton. Therefore, the cost of municipal waste disposal in the US could be $23.8 billion - a very big number. Those issues may be a great problems in the future.

    After careful consideration of the above reasons, I personally stand on the side of the advocates that the habit using the latest model of goods of wealthy people has more advantages than disadvantages. To sum up environment and economy need to develop with the most balanced way.
     
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  7. pichu pichu

    pichu pichu Thành viên tập sự

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    em Yến Chi E52 nộp bài writing task 2:
    Along with the development of society, more and more problems are bought to our attention, one of which is the environmental issues. In this topic, I want to discuss about the pollution of our land, water and air and what we should do to overcome those.
    A sizable percentage of people claim that they can see the polluted environment which has effect on their life everyplace. The first, I do strongly support the main problems on land are soil erosion which is caused by deforestation, using the land to construct the factories and buildings and an issue which I believe you have ever seen somewhere is litter on stress and land-fill sites full of rubbish. Perhaps, the most useful things we can do to tackle these difficulties is to refuse to give planning permission for new buildings, preserve forests and control garbage dumping and dispose litter sensibly.
    The second, when people think about the ways in which air is affected, they usually think about smog, acid rain, CFC’s and other forms of outdoor air pollution. However, it might be noted that air pollution also can exit inside our houses, offices and schools with the green house gases and chemical substances present . I know that steps are being taken to stop the damage to environment from air pollution in many countries . For instance, scientific groups study the damaging effects on plant, animal and human life, Legislative bodies write laws to control emissions for transportation vehicles and industries, etc. These methods are proving gradually their results .
    The last, the major effects of pollution on water are the contamination of water bodies ( e.g lakes, rivers, oceans and ground water), floods and droughts. What must we do when they affect directly on our water source? Some measures which are carried out are utilizing rationally the sewage treatment systems, charge polluting factories high taxes, etc. I realize that an other very important mean is that educators in school and universities teach students, beginning at very young age, about the effects on pollution.
    From what has been discussed above, we can finally draw the conclusion that only through the efforts of government and individual, can we deteriorate the amount of environmental pollution on the planet . In order to ensure that a healthy future will exits for ourselves and our children, we must try our best to protect environment.
     
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  8. xuanphuong_E49

    xuanphuong_E49 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em xuân phương - E49 nộp bài writing ạ.
    The issue of permitting children to labor for money is a controversial one. On the one hand some people think it is unreasonable. On the other hand, some others said that the work will be good for children to get working experience.

    Permitting children to work for an income is wrong. There are many reasons that can verify this. Firstly, children need time for play, exercise and rest. Working will prevent them from having the time and opportunity to enjoy being a child and developing normally. It might also be noticed that it is unlikely that children will know about their rights at work, or the laws that are in place to protect them. As a result, they are exploited. There is another factor that deserves some words here. Children often let work become more important than school. Therefore they leave school too soon, or not do well at school. It can spoil child chances for good, steady employment later.

    However, there are also a sizable percentage of people who take the view that children working for an income bring out many benefit. Perhaps this is because of the simple fact that for children, work can be an educational and satisfying experience as well as providing them with their own income. It can be the beginning of important learning about the value of money, time management, different rules, getting on with others and the expectations of people outside of school and family. Another reason why I advocate the attitude is that through variety of working which they have done from country to country, children have more opportunity to approach to the realities everyday life. These do not educate in their school such as culture, life style, cuisine, etc.

    Once you have known all of these, you must agree with me that if children want to work for money to have more effectively, they have to make sure that work is balanced with play, exercise, rest and study commitments. Children should not be involved in dangerous work, or work that might be harmful to their health or their physical, mental, spiritual, moral or social development.
     
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  9. fluently

    fluently Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Nguyễn Đình Luân lớp E52 gửi bài về ô nhiễm môi trường
    Along with the development of society, more and more problems are bought to our attention, one of which is that environmental comtamination is increasingly becoming a hot issue for almost countries in the world the problem is the increasing pollution of water, air and land.
    Firstly, it is the problem of water pollution. it’s a change for the worse of physics - chemistry -biology of water, with the presence of strange substances in liquid, solid, making the water becomes toxic to humans and animals. Water pollution caused by wastes and industrial wastewater is discharged into the river basin that is not treated properly; ofchemical fertilizers and pesticides leach into groundwater and pond water lakes; domestic wastewater is discharged from the residential areas along rivers causing serious pollution, affecting the health of people in the region. measures to limit the water pollution is to set emission limits for the factory and to raise awareness of people in the use of water.
    secondly, Environmental pollution of air is the presence a strange substancesor an important change in the composition of the air, making it clean, or cause the smell, unpleasant smelling, reduced visibility due to dust . It makes the oppressive and "smog", caused many diseases to humans. It also creates acid rain todestroy the forests and fields. the most worries is people released into the air of toxic gasessuch as CO2, which cause greenhouse effect.
    finally, Environmental pollution of land as a result of human activities alter the ecological factors beyond the limits of ecological communities in the soil.Soil pollution occurs when soil contaminated with toxic chemicals(concentrations exceed normal limits) by the activities of man asactive mining, industrial production.
    this is end of my report here!
     
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  10. apple13

    apple13 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Đức E52 nộp bài writing task 2 ạ :)

    Along with the rapid development of the society, more and more problems have risen. Among these is the pollution of environment with the three most important aspects: land, water and air. They have been causing to us many troubles.
    Land pollution concerns about the degradation of the Earth’s land surfaces. Human activities, especially urbanization, are said to attribute most to this. Construction uses up forest lands and green field sites, therefore the soil is easily erosed. The development of technology also leads to more hazadous wastes being disposed to contaminate the land. From my own view, I strongly regard the idea of balancing forest lands and industrial lands in a proper proportion as the most effective solution to this probem. In addition to that, reservoirs are necessary to be built in order not to lose land. People also take more responsibility to control the hazadous wastes.
    It might be clearly seen that water pollution has been seriously affecting the life of human beings, plants as well as animals. It occurs when polutants are discharged directly or indirectly into water source without adequate treament to remove toxic compounds. Pollutants can be anything, from rubbish of one household to harmful chemicals, by-products of companies. Thus, the conduct of everyone is undoubtedly the main factor to reduce water pollution. Countries ought to issue restricted laws to control wastes from factories, as well as checking the pollution level of rivers, lakes, seas …. frequently.
    What is also worth noticing is that air pollution is a major problem faced by people all over the world. Toxic fumes, harmful chemicals from vehicles, factories and the living activites of human have been damaging the atmosphere. The hole of the ozon layer is getting bigger and bigger. If necessary solutions are not taken, our lives will be seriously threatened. The cut down on air pollutants, such as carbon monoxide, carbon dioxides, CFCs .. is supposed to be the key measures to protect the air. Besides, the using of renewable energy as a replacement of fossil fuel is really appreciated.
    From what has been discussed, it is easily to realize that environmental pollution is a serious problem nowadays. Therefore, peole should use their own knowledge and experience to get down to together to make our environment clean.
     
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  11. fluently

    fluently Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Nguyễn Thị Lý lớp E52 gửi bài writing task 2 về ô nhiễm môi trường
    With the advance of the human civilization, there are an increasing number of people who have raised doubt about whether the number of nations is emerging critical blows for contamination of soil, water and air.

    Firstly, the soil pollution is resulted by activities that people had done for example the mineral exploitations, the products, the using much fertilizers and pesticides, deforestations,…, it leads to eroded, ecological disequilibrium, poor nutrients land. Therefore, it is essential to plant reforestation, keep remaining the sustainable development in product, apply the technical science for manufacture. In addition, it is combined both rational use of mineral resources and use of remarkable resources.
    Secondly, the water contamination is consisted of natural and artificial origin. In the one hand, the water pollution comes naturally such as rain, snow, wind storm, floods,…. It is useful to both plant many trees in the city and reforestation. In the other hand, water pollution originating from artificial process hazardous waste primarily as a liquid, such as municipal waste, industrial, agricultural, transportation on water. Meanwhile, manufactories need to treat rubbishes before being discharged into the environment; the government must make the law to manage and protect it.
    Finally, the air pollution is resulted by the activities of natural, industrial, transportation and living. The main reason made air contamination has been coming industry such as burning of fossil fuels: coal, oil, gas generated: CO2, CO, SO2, other organics. In addition, it is caused by combustion engine fuel, forest fire, activitied volcanoes …. Thus, it can be charged polluting factories high taxes, bought cars with less – polluting engines.
    From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that the environmental contamination that include land, water and air pollution and the ways solve has been becoming the important problems all time.
     
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  12. chu_linh_chi123

    chu_linh_chi123 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Hoàng Thị THanh Việt - Group 2- Writting Task 1 - Pie chart


    These graphs provide information about the effect of testing a new flu vaccine on women in June 1996 in a large country town.
    For bar charts that present data the number of deaths from flu over this year at both genders. It can be said that flu killed 2 women but no men from March to May. On the other hand, from June to August there were 4 female killed by influenza while only one male died of grippe.
    Even though the amount of female deaths jumped between two these periods, the line graph shows that the number of flu cases went down from June to August not only in women but also men. For example, with regarding to female in March, there were over 1000 cases, picking up rapidly to peak of 3500 in June. After that, the amount of cases plummeted immediately to 3000 that means plunged about 500 cases. Then, in August the death number was only 2800 cases. In the same way, as for male the trend was similar but more slowly. It can be clearly seen that the new vaccine had a positive effect on the amount of new cases of flu.
    Return to the pie chart, the graph illustrates the percentage of women who have most at risk received testing of new vaccine. There was only 28% of female did not participate. In contrast, of 72% remaining who took part, the most proportion is 35% were aged (over 65 years old); 24% were babies or children; and 13% were either hospitalised or receiving other medical attention.
    In conclusion, these graphs give data to demonstrate the efficient of a new vaccine on female in June 1996.
     
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    hoa-E52 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Hoa -E52 nộp bài Writing:

    Topic: Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air.
    What are these problems and how might they be reduced ?


    Along with the development of society, more and more problems are bought to our attention, one of which is that environmental pollutions are being in most countries in the world everyday. These problems are divided to three polluted fields including land, water and air.
    First of all, it goes without saying that land pollutions are more and more obviously. Nowadays, along with the rising population, the number of rubbish is increased rapidly, especially living waste lead to the serious contaminated land. If you go along on the streets, you can seethe garbage everywhere. Moreover, the discriminate deforestation also causes the soil erosion. To minimize the negative impacts to land, we need to reduce waste by using the environmental friendly products and recycle rubbish. Other way is that provide the protection measures such as banning deforestation and green barren hills by planting more trees.
    Besides the polluted land, water is also a factor polluted serious contamination. We all know that water is one of the indispensable elements for human lives. However, the amount of water adapting the human requirements is more increasingly reduced as a result of contaminated rivers. Rubbish is not only filled land but also floated on the rivers. Furthermore, plants often discharge directly into untreated litter to the rivers. That affected significantly to the lives of aquatic species. For example, many fishes are died as a consequence of that rubbish and dirty water. In addition, floods and droughts are parts of problems on water. Disforestation is one of causes lead to them.
    Perhaps the most helpful thing we can do to tackle these difficulties is to charge polluting factories high taxes, having measures to clean water.
    Finally, air pollution is one of the inseparable issues of environmental problems. Polluted atmosphere includes exhaust of vehicles as cars, motorbike; emissions from factories and from domestic utensils. If this atmosphere condenses, it can become acid rain and destroy many things. Especially, the toxic fumes lead to respiration diseases as asthma, cancer and lung disease. These can be dealt with by carrying out many methods such as using fuel-efficient cars, having policies on limited emissions of the factories, and turning of electrical appliances when not in use.
    Based on the above discussion and analysis, we can see that the problems on land, water and air are always closely related to each other and go together. They affect seriously to human lives, not just one country or region that is on all over the world.
     
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  14. hang.vuminh

    hang.vuminh Đủ quyền lập Họ

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    Em Vũ Minh Hằng - E52

    Topic 2:
    Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air.
    What are these problems and how might they be reduced?

    Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is environmental pollution. Environmental pollution comes in various forms, such as land pollution, water pollution and air pollution.

    Firstly, this is the land pollution, one of the gravest problems existing on the earth. The land can become polluted from dangerous materials such as heavy metals, pesticides and landfills. It is often caused by human activities and their misusage of land resources. When these pollutants get mixed with air, this causes acid rain and when they are discharged directly or indirectly into water, this spreads the pollution further. Solutions, therefore, involve not only removing the source of pollution but also cleaning up and restoring the polluted area.

    Secondly, water pollution has become a serious environmental concern in Vietnam and other countries around the world. Water pollution occurs anytime when the contaminants including fertilizer, pesticides, and waste enter into a water source such as the ocean, rivers, lakes and groundwater. It has damaged the food chain and the drinking water, thus it has a huge impact on the health of an individual and the environment. Consequently, each person has to raise awareness about the importance of environmental issues and what can be done: reduce the waste, never throw solid or liquid into the water, and conserve water in an effective way.

    Last but not least, air pollution is becoming a major problem all over the world. Air pollution is in the form of a gas emitted by factories, power plants and automobiles. Anyone can see the brownish sky over a city or the dark smoke from a motorbike. Its effects range from contaminated rain to global warming. Recycling, riding or taking public transport and planting trees are some great ways to help reduce air pollution.

    Environmental pollution has put life on this planet at risk. Fortunately, there are many solutions that can be taken by individuals, businesses, goverments and international organizations in order to keep the world in a good condition so that future generations will have the same natural resources.
     
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  15. liti.hanoi

    liti.hanoi Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Nguyen Anh Nga lớp E 51 nộp bài ạ!

    Happiness is depend on itself person. Each person can define happiness in his own way. In this article I want to mention the subject “Sometimes the happiness does not depend on whether you have a lot of money or not”.
    Some people viewing in perspective say that having a lot of money makes people happy. Because if there is a lot of money, life will be perfect. The person having a lot of money do not have to worry about making money, they always feel comfortable with their lives. They have the conditions for better health care by the modern and expensive medical equipments. They are regular health care by the private well-known doctor so their disease are pushed back. They have much money to pay for special and expensive services so their health be sure better.
    Their lives are often interesting because they have conditions to do whatever they want such as travelling, purchasing of assets and wealth. Their children are educated in the prestigious schools with the expensive tuition.
    Additinally, they have much opportunities to interact with other richer and well-known people, they always be known and admired.
    The contrast with the above positive is the negative viewing, that is having a lot of money makes people miserable such as: The richer are likely less demand to have more money, they have no motivation to strive for, no purpose to look forward to, so their life is really boring.
    In addition, having a lot of money makes them are always to be guarded to against intruders stole the wealth. I have read on the website www.vietnamnet.vn having 95% of the stolen is aimed to the richer. Some of the richest on the world was murdered by the criminals or inheritancer.
    Moreover, the richer have to hire the bodyguards to protect them. Every time they go out they always take precautions,vigilance, and they often feel unsafe because they can be killed
    Their children often fear by kidnapping and extorted, so they are always keeping careful by the bodygard, especially in crowded, therefore they are not comfortable entertainment like other children.
    From my own perspective, having a lot of money makes people happy, however, the more important is you really feel comfortable with your life.
     
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  16. okita273

    okita273 Thành viên tập sự

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    em Phương Duyên E 51 nộp bài.


    Along with the rapid development of the society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is about the link between the wealth and happiness. Some people take the view that having lots of money will make people happy. Nevertheless, there is also a majority of people who strongly holds the opinion that having a lot of money makes people miserable. From my own perspective, the happiness maybe related with wealth, but not at all.

    There are many arguments around the idea that holding lots of money will bring happiness for people. Firstly, rich people never have to worry about money, they can do almost things they want. Like for instance, they can buy big houses, modern cars, or every newest technology instruments. Furthermore, rich people can go to travel everywhere they want, therefore their knowledge about the society as well as the other field will be expaned. They also can use their money to help the poor people. As a result of these activities, they will feel comfortable and interested with their life. Secondly, wealthy people will have the best healthcare services. For example, if they are ill, the best doctor will treat for them. They will come to the best hospital or will not have to elbow others out in a public hospital. They will use the best medicines in the world.

    However, there are also some people strongly holding the view that having a lot of money makes people miserable. From their perspective, when people have much money, there is no reason for them to work hard and get on in life because it will make no difference to their lived. Life will become very boring and meaningless. Moreover, they maybe have no real friends. People around them almost are adulators. Some rich people think that they are in higher class in the society. They are not friendly with the people who are poorer than them. Their lifes will be very lonely. Furthermore, rich people’ meal is always have too much nutriens. Therefore, they will be easy to catch some diseases like diabetes, overweight, heart diseases, gouts…

    From my own perspective, to have happiness, besides wealth, the other factors are also very important like family, friends, your lifestyle… Happiness do not need having lots of money. Instead of depending on money to have happiness, let’s use money appropriately to have happiness.

    From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that wealth just is one of many factors building the happiness. If we are poor, do not let the money control our happiness. Let find exciting lifestyle to makes ourseilves comfortable. If we are rich, let use money properly and useful.
     
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  17. eragonyb000

    eragonyb000 Thành viên tập sự

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    em Hùng E51 nộp bài
    Many people in the world always wish they had both wealth and happiness in their life. actually, the fist choice of many people is always wealth because they believer that if they had a lot of money, they would have happiness too. however, I agree with the idea that wealth has both positive and negative effect, it not only make our happy but also take it always.
    Having a lot of money is a dream of many poor man and this may bring happiness for them. I can tell you some reason. Fist, they do not need to worry about their daily meal that very important for human life. They can eat many delicious dishes and drink some kind of expensive wine in the luxury restaurant. Second, they have many time to do exciting activities. They can play some sports of rich man like golf, tenis…spend money to shopping in some sumptuous city like paris, london…or go to Lasvegas for gambler. Thirt,
    In contrast, with some rich persons, money is not every things. they are not happy like people think. their life become very boring and meaningless because of not having some targets to try their best in work. They work when they want and may be not have effect, but there is nothing. In addition, they do not have real friends. When they rich, many people want to become their friends because of their money, but when they have difficult problems, no one help them. Finally, rich man may be very weak because of many rich diseases like diabetic, gout.. the reason of this come from their daily meal. They eat a lot of foot that contain hight protein, sugar, lipit..
    From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that wealth can bring happy for you or not. It depend on the feeling of each other.
     
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  18. Hikaru1801

    Hikaru1801 Thành viên tập sự

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    Chi oi, em Le Oanh Minh lớp E52 gui bai writing No2, nha em dem qua bi mat dien, den sang nay moi type not o vp roi moi gui duoc cho chi :( hu hu dung phat em nhe :p

    Topic 2:
    Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air.
    What are these problems and how might they be reduced?

    As one of the most important problems of the 20 century, environmental pollution has a stiff impact in all aspects of our lives. Humanity is polluting earth’s environment so fast, and having a truth is main factors shaping the world: land, water and air are being contaminated seriously.
    Firstly, polluted land is considered all the phenomena of land as soil contamination by pollutants. The causes of this trouble are explained by the human and natural activities, such as soil erosion, litter on the streets, building in rural areas, land – fill sites full of rubbish, deforestation, soil waste …. For example, according to the Environmental Protection Agency, trash from households, business, and municipalities to local landfills in 1988 equaled 163 million tons, or about 40 pounds per person. Like pesticides, they are long-lasting and can spread through the environment. It includes paper, plastic, bottles and cans, food scraps, and garden trimmings. If wanting the soil pollution is declined, finding the possible solutions now is so important. One of the solutions is reducing waste and recycling rubbish, for example like two-sided copying on paper and backyard composting. This will decrease the amount of waste that will be disposed of in landfills. The Government can raise awareness of the importance of reduction through campaigns and advertisements and encourage the pubic to participate actively in reduction strategies like waste exchange program. Reduction methods can have positive environmental impacts like conserving resources. In addition, there are many another ways to drop the amount of waste produced like charging polluting factories high taxes, reusing a product, producing biodegradable objects, refusing to give planning permission for new buildings …
    Secondly, water contamination has been seriously affecting the life of humans, plants as well as animals. The eco-system of rivers, streams, lakes, seas and oceans is also getting deteriorated due to the contamination of water, through various sources. In fact, this condition also leads to the outbreak of numerous diseases, majority of them being lethal and contagious. For example, water pollution kills all kinds of animals every year. Just the EXXON VALDEZ oil spill near anchorage Alaska caused over 3,000 otters to die 36,000 different kinds of seabirds were killed and over 100 eagles. Oil spills are one of–if not the worst types of pollution. They happen most often in the ocean and then get spread around by tides and currents where they enter streams and rivers and cover everything. They kill life and pollute more in a short amount of time than pesticides and human waste combined in about 1 year… Therefore, water pollution has to stop. By the ways, humanity is trying to control level of water pollution. Some solutions are applied like encouraging smart agricultural practices, reducing urban/ suburban runoff of lawn fertilizers and pesticides, preventing further destruction wetlands, and reestablish them wherever possible, improve sewage treatment…
    Finally, air pollution is the presence of abnormal concentration and abnormal constituents in air. Fresh air is needed for a healthy life. That is why people go out for morning walks so that they can breathe as much fresh air as possible. But the quality of the air has been deteriorating in urban areas. It is being polluted by smoke, harmful gasses, dust articles and other matters. Air pollution arises from many sources. The burning of gasoline in automobiles produces harmful gases and incineration of products. From various factories come millions of particles that are carried off in the air. Chemical plants produce gaseous by-products that are toxic when their concentration is high enough. As parts of the world become more industrialized, air pollution has generally increased and new health hazards have developed. Air pollution can result from causes that human can not control. For example, forest fires, dust storms, and volcanoes. Air pollution also causes global warming. According to some predictions, significant alterations in climate patterns could become apparent in a few years. Estimates of global average temperatures have projected an increase of as much as 9o F before the year 2100. The governments of the world’s nations are taking measures to solve this problem. Many countries have passed Clean Air Act, which have reduced the air pollution. However, these laws are not enough to protect the environment. The citizens of these countries have to take steps to help solve this problem. For example, getting the car tuned more frequently so it will create less smoke. For factories, owners, to use resources that producing fewer pollutants, for example instead of using coal, use natural gas, because it produces less pollution.
    In conclusion, imagine a scenario, a Red Cross truck pulls into a small community and starts handing out bottled water to people in dire need of pure safe water to drink. It is hard to imagine this kind of event water very important for our life. If the problems continuous like this, that day might not be a thing of the distant future. All things that people can do save the environment and hope for the really positive solutions to these problems.
     
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    hoaithu1710 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Hoài Thu-E52 nộp bài ạh.(C oi hôm qua em có chút việc bận nên giờ mới nộp bài được, c đừng phạt e c nhé, giờ e nghèo lắm.hihi:D
    Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is environmental pollution. Environmental pollution problem includes three important land pollution, water pollution, air pollution
    Firstly, land pollution is caused by humans are used in agricultural chemicals and waste into the soil environment of diverse waste. In such wastes, substances that can not be biodegradable and especially radioactive. Land also heavy metals from the atmosphere as dust (lead,, Hg, Cd, Mo ...) and the radioactive. Debris from urban areas, the use of fertilizers in agriculture, deforestation caused soil erosion also contribute to soil pollution. The solution to pollution is to use earth-friendly products with the environment, to waste prescribed places, forest exploitation reasonably
    Secondly, water pollution has become a concern for the environment seriously in Vietnam and other countries around the world. The speed of industrialization and urbanization and rapidly increasing population pressure on increasingly severe water resources lie in regions. Aquatic environment in many urban areas, industrial zones and craft villages are increasingly polluted by sewage, waste gas and solid waste. Contaminated water, causing significant degradation to human health, so to reduce water pollution, education to raise awareness of people is very important.
    Finally, air pollution can not be separated when it comes to environmental pollution. Air pollution is increasing in the industrial development of developing countries. The increase in industrial production and circulation of motor vehicles to make the waste into the air a growing number of smoke, toxic gases and other pollutants. Air pollution is caused by many reasons: to increase energy production, metallurgy, transport, incineration ... To reduce air pollution should use the vehicles fuel economy and limit emissions in factories, not howling drugs in public places, trees ..
    From the problems discussed above can be found contaminated soil, water and air are closely related. They seriously affect the health of people so everyone please join hands to protect the environment as it becomes green-clean-nice.
     
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  20. MomMi

    MomMi Chia sẻ nếu cần sẻ chia

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    Ms. Van - E49 - Writing Task 2 - Violence in Playgrounds. - sorry vì em nộp muộn, đợt này em nhiều việc quá.

    School-base violence includes violence within the playground and classroom is increasing. Allowing the experts, there are many ways to solve this problem. However, parents should not teach children to against bullies.
    Firstly, The children do not fight back at bullies when being learned the problem solving skills and having their confident. The parents should encourage their children to calm, look into the bully’s eyes and said: “I am/ I want you/ he stop this action” and then walk. They suggest that their children should make friend with a group or class- made. A group will be less frightened than alone. In addition, the children can ask their teachers for help when being bulled.
    It could also be argued that the parents should be concerned about their children, and find out children’s situation in school. The parents can contact their school: talk to child’s teacher, supervisor or school board. The best way is prevention early to help children avoid bullying.
    In my opinion, beside the family education, the role of schools is also important. Schools and teachers need to take measures to prevent and handle school-base violence and protect children. People must persuade in society “DO NOT use violence against children”. Government should issued sanctions for acts of violence.
    To sum up, it is important to curbs on school violence. Some ways to do, such as: (1) Parents and teachers need to link together to protect children; (2) Updating knowledge by them selves to care and education’ (3) A habit of healthy behavior need to be created that helping children conference and share with everyone.
     
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