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TRẦN THỊ MỸ HẠNH E54. writing_practice 1. task 1.
"The line graph reveals the new engineering using trends in houses in the United Kingdom from 1996/97 to 2002/03. It can be clearly seen that all four these media increased for 6 years.
In 1996/97, the number of CD player was maximum at 60%. For 6 year, whether it rose gradually but it still number one, its peak was 85%. Home computer quantity also was a rise steadily trend. From number two place in 1996/97 with 28% home computer fell third place with 55%, behind CD player and mobile phone. During 6 years, the number of mobile phone fluctuated wildly but it still was upward trend, it rose from 18% in 1996/97 to 70% in 2002/03, it was second. Although, Internet access appeared later, but it increased sharply from 10% in 1998/99 to 45% in 2002/03. However, in 2002/03, the internet access wasn’t completely popular, so there weren’t too many people using it, so it was final.
On the whole, all the media also had augmented trends for 6 years. The Internet access rose dramatically but it didn’t stand at number one place. Although, the CD player quantity rose slightly, but it was always standing at first from 1996/97 to 2002/03.

 

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manh cuong . E54 task 1

The line graph compare house rate in the Unit Kingdom use some electronic devides in periods. It can be clearly see that there are upward. However, there are two general groups: climb steadily and fuctuation.
As regards the first, the CD player percentage increase slightly from almost 60% to over 80% in the 2002/03. Likewise, the trend for Home computer was upward. Between1996/97 and 2002/03, gradual leap from fust under 30% to around 55%. Besides, the proportion of internet access was up, during the period 1998/99 to 2002/03, surged dramatically from approximately 10% to over 40%.
The percentage of Mobile phone went up erratically. Between 1996/97 and 1998/99, it rided slowly, from under 20% to nearly 30% then over the period 1998/99 to 2002/03, it jumped sharply from just under 30% to around 70%.
The report is end here.

 

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Em Huyền Trang - E54 nộp bài chị nhá

The line graph reveals the changing bias in percentage of using hight-tech appliance in the UK’s house. It can be clearly seen that there is a suddenly jump of all technology: CD player, Mobile phone, Internet access and Home computer.
There are two basic general trends: upward and fluctuation. As a regrads the first, the using of CD player start on the top with 60% in 1996 and climb steadily to more than 80% in 2003. Beside, the home computer is common more and more, and during 6 years the percentage rise from 30% to nearly 60%. futhermore, Internet access which appear in 98-99 with 10% and skyrocket to 50% in 4years. On the other hand, the using of mobile phone fluctuade slightly and the trend is upward, in 2002-2003 it lead to 70% follow CD player.
From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in UK’house is grow up dramaticly years by years.

 

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Nộp hộ bạn Tuấn Anh - E54 nữa ạk ^^

The line graph reveals change to use modern technologies of household in UK’s market in period from 1996 to 2003
It can be clearly seen that there were two general trends: upward and fluctuation. As regards the first was included CD player, Home computer and Internet access. The once period 1996 to 2001, CD player increased from 60 percent to nearly 80 percent and Home computer rose significantly to 45 percent from 30 percent. Likewise, Internet access hold only 10 percent when joined to market in 1998 then jumped dramatically to over 30 percent in 2001.
However in second period, the trend of CD player and Internet access was steady rise, in fact CD player reached approximately 85 percent nevertheless it was the number 1 in UK’ market and Top’ Internet access was 45 percent so which was the number 4.But Computer home was still rising gradually and reach peak of 55 percent thus that was the number 3
The last, Mobile phone fluctuated erratically during the period .As it improved from nearly 20 percent in 1996 to 45 percent at the first half of year 1999 and then constant the latter half year. Nonetheless it skyrocketed to 75 percent and named the position number 2
Generally, the modern technology in home was used rise up year by year.

 

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Em là Nguyễn Phương THảo E54. Em nộp bài ( writting task 1) ạ
The line graph above shows in percentage terms the development of four kinds of home technologies in the United Kingdom during the period from 1996 to 2003.
It is clearly for us to see that, except for the mobile phone’s instability for the first few year, they mostly belong to the trend upward. CD player proved to be the most popular appliance throughout the observed period with a steady increase by over 20 %. Home computer witnessed the same rise from over 20 % in 1996/1997 to under 60 % in 2002/2003. Although mobile phone experienced some fluctuations during the whole period, and internet only appeared in the survey since 1998/1999, they both jumped sharply by approximately 40 %.
In conclusion, illustrated in the graph is the development trend of four main modern technologies in the United Kingdom’s households. In spite of being traditional or new appliances, they all promised to become wide spread day by day.

 

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Do young people today make good use of their leisure time? Or do they spend too much time watching television and playing video games, instead of taking part in more productive activities?

In our time and age, people, especially young people have many choices of activities that they like to do. But it seems that they do not use their leisure time properly.
I should start off by explaining how is proper use of leisure time. It means that you use time to do something that be helpful to your life. As an illustration, if you playing volleyball, it can help you relax and become friendly and stronger. Another example is helping your parents to do houseworks, this is a beneficial action.
In constrast, the wrong way to use free-time is spending time for useless things that waste your time, money and health without benefits. For example, if you use free time for drinking alcohol, it not only make you waste time and money but also be harmful to your health.
From my own perspective, young people now do not make good use of their spare time. They use too much time watching television or playing video games.
The reason that can be seen by every person is that nowaday, almost families have telivision and there are many interesting television progams all over the world. So young people can watch it all day without feeling bored or tired. Moreover, there are more and more game-services in both countries and cities where young people can play many computer games. Despite there are some advantages of the two activities such as provide knowledge or entertainments, it is really harmful if you watch television or play games too much, in another way more than two hours a day. As it cause many vision problems in students and even cause autism.
I do strongly support the idea that young people should take part in more productive activities which can help them relax and do not have any disadvantage. They are the activities that close to the nature and make people must use many soft skills such as play sports, enjoy some charity activities, go picnic with family or friends…
All reliable evidences point to one saying, that is young people now use their spare time in the wrong way and in my point of view, their family and school should encourage them to enjoy more productive activities.

 

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]Em là Hồ Trung Hiếu E54. Em nộp bài, có gì sai chị sửa giúp em ạ. Cám ơn chị nhiều!

The line graph shows in percentage terms the change of four main kinds of household technologies in the United Kingdom from 1996 to 2003.
As we can see easily from the graph, mobile phone tended to be instable in the first few years while the others rose steadily. It had some fluctuations during the period, but leveled off in 2002/2003. In the upward trend, CD player seemed to be the most popular appliance throughout the period. It increased gradually by over 20% by the late of 2001. There was a significant increase in the number of home computer from over 20% in 1996/1997 to under 60% in 2002/2003. Although only appeared since 1998/1999, internet jumped sharply by approximately 40%.
In conclusion, the graph focuses on the changing patterns of four main kinds of home technologies in the United Kingdom. Along with the development of society, people are getting more acquainted with modern appliances. From domestic or new technologies, they are believed to bring us a better life.

 

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Em Hoàng Kim Chi - mới chuyển sang E54
Writting task 1: describing the line graph.

The line graph reveals the trend of people using the modern technology in the UK from 1996 to 2003. It can be clearly seen that we have 4 sphere: home computer, internet access, mobile phone and CD player.
As you can see from the graph, the all rates were increasing except mobile phone. CD player rose steadily from 60% to 80% in more than 7 years. Home computer had the same speed of increase with about 29% in 1996/97 and over 50% in 2002/03. Intermet access grew considerably, faster than the two before; but it firstly appeared in 1998/99 with 10% and in 2002/03, the rate rose to 45%.
Mobile phone had a different trend, not really increased, it fluctuated. You can see the proportion started with 18% in 1996/97, then rosed up to 45% between 1998/99 and 2000/01. But in 2000/01, it fell and then rose again with the percentage of over 60. From then on, it increased slightly.
Gradually, we can see that CD player ranked the first. the next was mobile phone. Home computer ranked the third and finally it was Internet access.
So, in that period, the most popular domestic access to modern technology in homes in UK was CD player. I think it was a very convenient way to enjoy our modern life with so wonderful music and entertainment at home.

 

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Em Đinh Quang Vinh-E53 nộp bài writing task 2


Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that the way youth spending their free time. Some people concern that leisure time has been shrinking as a result of the tremendous advance in modern technology. From my own perspective, adolescents waste their time in games or television programs, instead of doing productive activities. I would like to present two explanations to confirm that I am right.

First of all, young people don’t have good advice how to use their spare time wisely. In actual fact, in the school, teachers don’t encourage the students to join useful clubs or societies. They only concern about scores, results more than everything. Students don’t know how to spend leisure time in the right way, so that they don’t interested in any outdoor activities.

A more essential factor why I advocate the argument is that entertain technology become important part of our life very easy. Actually, many teenagers believe that they can find themselves in the games rather than go out to the world. They don’t have confident to face the world. Add to that, the games or TV programs are created by the imagination so the worlds in them are amazing, seem to be very attractive. Consequently, they only live in the unreal world.

From what have been discuss above, we may finally draw the conclusion that people have to worry about how to use their leisure time correctly, not in vain.[/COLOR]

 

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Task 1

The line graph chart compares the percentage change between the access pattern used in house in the UK with modern technology. It can be clearly seen that there are two basic general trends: upwards and fluctuation.
Fistly, the rate of three patterns using : Internet access, Home computer, CD player was increased from 1996 to 2003. Although appearing later and only achieved 10% in 1998 but the rate of the Internet access skyrocketed rapidly and reached more than 40% in 2003. Furthermore, the Home computer clamb steadily from less than 30% to nearly 60% between 1996 and 2003. Whereas, with the highest rate was 60% in 1996, CD player continued to soar to over 80% in 2003 and stilled highest proportion in types of access.
Besides, the Mobile phone fluctuated continuously during 1996 to 2003. Between 1996 and 1999, the used rate was more than doubled from under 20% to over 40%, then trended to level off in 2000. After that, the rate was rocketed dramatically from over 40% and achieved nearly 70% in 2003.
It is noticeable that the percentage terms of the access patterns have changed dramatically and the CD player is the most widely used in households in the UK.



Nguyễn Thị Thùy Dung
E54

 

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TASK 1


The graph provides information about the patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK.
There are two basic general trends : upward and fluctuated . First , graph shows the form of Mobile phone fluctually in a number of years , rocked gradually from under 20 % to 45 % in 1998-1999, then leveled off and soar rapidly to achieved the highest rate was 70 % in 2003-2004.
Besides, trend of other three modern technology were increased at similar level. There was a rose in Internet access from 10% in 1998-1999 to 45% . Furthermore , the used both CD player and the home computer upward year by year . The home computer term dropped slightly from under 30% to over 50% . Finally , trend of domestic access to CD player also skyrocketed gradually and peaked of more than 80% in 2002-2003.Thus , this leveled form of reach the highest rate and many people in the UK the most widely used.
It is noticeable that the domestic access to modern technology the Internet access less than the three other form . this ends my report here.


Nguyễn thị kim tuyến
E54

 

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Em Hoàng Thị Thanh Việt - E53 - Writing Task 2: Do you think young people...?
Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that whether young people use their spare time sensibly or not.
First of all, we should definite what leisure time is. Following Oxford dictionary, leisure time is the time that is spent doing what you enjoy when you are no working or studying. On the other hand, according to French author, free time is an interval you want to do everything or do whatever you want without fearing to be rebuked.
In fact the more developing technology is, the more ways youth entertain. However, that means there are worse side due to the most young people are wasting a lot of time to non-useful activities like watching television and playing video games or sitting along time front of computer for chatting, surfing internet. Even if they know the worth of free time as well as the benefit of productive activities, they still do not spend time on useful activities such as playing sport, taking part in going to the cinema or visiting museums and art galleries, or joining social organization. Visiting these places was too mundane, dull and tasteless for them since they do not acknowledge enjoyment concealed from sculptures or art pictures. There is a further more subtle point we must consider that beside young people use time misspent, others utilize more efficient participating in community activities. For instance, they volunteers to urge people on planning trees or not throwing rubbish on the street in protection of environment movement or to assist who have plight such as elder, orphans, foundling or homeless. Yet I am one of many people who feel that it is merely difficult to how much spare time is enough for everybody but the signification is the way you use your leisure time.
All the evidence supports an unmistakable conclusion that nowadays youth seem not to control their time, especially their free time. It is also one of extremely critical problems we should take note more.

 

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Chị ơi e Luyến E 53 nộp bài nhé

Nowadays, leisure time activities are set to play a larger part in people’s daily lives than ever before. As a result of technology development, many people alarm that younger are immersing in indoor activities such as watching television and playing video games instead of taking part in that outdoor which are more effective. I find this opinion invalid, for the following reasons.

The first reason that can be seen by every person is that sitting in front of a television or a game screen is not the most preferable of many young people. Youth nowadays have a wide choice of leisure-time activities after long hard day at work or school such as playing sport, listen to music, traveling or participating social events..etc. They also have a growing concern about the effectiveness of what activities they enjoyed. They know that not only do sports help develop their muscle and stamina, but they also enable them to cultivate necessary skills like team-work, sportsmanship. So in the recent years, the number of sport centers or clubs, even sporting events quickly increase. Beside, music and art also have a strong appeal to young. They prefer to enjoy a music liveshow than see it on the television at home. In addition, tourism is modern form of this society. Many young people consider the planned trips to gain so many physical, social and mental benefits.
There is a further more subtle point we must consider is that the benefits of watching television, playing video game and the purpose of the user. Some people might argue that watching television, a common leisure activity, has seriously hampered the viewers' development. However, there is evidence that television program are becoming increasingly educational and instructive. For example, quiz shows encourage critical thinking, while educational channels, such as Discovery, broaden watchers' knowledge. While advertisements bear aesthetical and ideological values, talk shows display the art of languages and the news providing the information about many fields every day as economic, education, society, science ..etc. In addition, most of younger paying video game for relax and use television as a way to pursue their interests. Like for instances, youngers who play sports usually choose sport program, while people like fashion prefer the fashion shows.

Based on the above discussion and analysis, we can see that as a result of wide range of productive activities, television and video game hardly take too much leisure time for most young people who know spent their time in useful way.

 

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NGUYỄN THỊ PHƯƠNG MAI _ E55
TASK1:

The line graphs compare the use trends of domestic modern technologies in UK between 1996 and 2003. It can be seen clearly that the trend move upward.

During 7 years, the percentage of CD player, home computer and internet access surged gradually. CD player started with a higher percentage than another domestic technologies and it increased steadly from 60% to more than 80%.
Had the same trend of upward with home computer and CD player, but internet access appeared more lately from 1998 with a litte percentage of use (10%). Nonetheless, it skyrocketed dramatically from 10% to 45% just in 5 years.
Whether mobile phone had a obvious climb, however it rised and fell erratically, especially in the period of 1998 to 2001. In the same year 1996, the percentage of home computer (29%) was more than mobile phone (19%), but throughout 7 years of statistics, the trend of use in mobile phone shot up significantly to 70%.

Overall, the trend of domestic modern technologies in UK is predicted to move upward.

[170 words]

 

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Mai Xuân Mạnh - E55 nộp bài wrting task 1 - unit 1

The graph provides information about the percentage trend of the new technology using household number over from1996/97 to 2002/03.
There are two basic general trend :fluctuation and upward. As regards the first,the used mobifone percentage fluctuated ,but slight and the trend was rise from 20% to 65% over the period .
Little difference,the percentage of three other technologies went up by varying degrees.CD player and home computer go up steadily over all period . CD player started at 25% in 1996/97 and pick up 80% in 2002/03, home computer was from 27% to 55% similar.Specially, Internet access although was born later,at 1998/99,but only over the halft of decade, it shooted up from 10% to around 40% in 2002/03.Generally ,the percentage of CD player always was highest in new technology, with 80%, everything can be changing .
With the development of the world, the new technology infiltrated and became important apart of the household life in the UK and the trend will till continue in feature.

 

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Nguyễn Hữu Minh - E55
Em nộp bài ạ , vì nick ttvnol chưa confirm nên ko post bài được.

Writing task 1 Unit 1

The graph presents data about the trend of domestic access to modern technology in UK’s homes from 1996.97 to 2002/03.

It can be clearly seen that there are two basic general trends: upward and fluctuated. The percentages of CD player, Internet Access and Home computer rose gradually. Mobile phone ‘s percentage was fluctuated.

As regard the first , the CD player’s percentage increased from 60% in 1996/97 to over 80% in 2002/03. As for Home computer , it increased from about 30% in 1996/07 to nearly 75% in 2002/03. In the case of Internet Access , it appeared in 1998/99 and increased from bottom with 10% to over 40% in 2002/03.
Turning to the Mobile phone, the trend is fluctuated but it was upward from near the bottom of graph in 1996/97 to over 60% in 2002/03.

In conclution , the percentage of domestic access to modern technology in UK was upward and will become more popular in the future.
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Em là Trần Phương Anh- lớp E55
em gửi bài ạ
Writing task 1

The line graph reveals the various trends of household using new technology in family in the United Kingdom from 1996/97 to 2002/03.
It can be clearly seen that all four kinds of media are increase in this period, while CD player, home computer and internet access are surge steadily, only mobile phone is fluctuated. As regard the first, the percentage of using CD player is the highest, it went up from 60% in 1996/97 to 82% and marks it’s peak in 2002/03. The home computer also has a slightly rising from 28% to 55% in this time. Besides, the internet access which appears in 1998/99 with only 11% has an outstanding leap into 43% in 2002/03, it proves that the internet is quickly becoming an important part of modern life.
While three aspects are moving up firmly, the mobile phone is improve erratically. The graph shows that between 1996/97 and 1998/99, it rides slowly, from 18% to nearly 30% then from 1998/99 to 2002/03, it climbs sharply from 30% to 70%.
In conclusion, the graph describes the changing patterns of accessing home technologies in the United Kingdom. It is obvious that tend to use mordern technology products is growing up by year.

 

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Em là Cao Thùy Dung _lớp E5
Em gửi bài writing taks 1
The graphs provide the trends of modern technology use in UK household from 1996/97 to 2002/03. There are two basic trends: upward and fluctuation.
Percentage of domestic access to CD player and home computer improved steadily from 1996/97 to 2002/03. Both of them increased about over 20%, begin 60% in 1996/97 up to over 80% in 2002/03 with CD player, while home computer using rate from 30% pick up approximately 55% in 2002/03. The strongest changing was witnessed in Internet access. In case Internet using only appeared in 1998/99 with 10% survey selected household, but Internet trend moved upward sharply to over 30% in 2000/01. This rate reached peak point in 2002/03 to 45%. So that, within only four years, Internet access percentage increased more than 4 times.
By a contract, the changing of mobile phone using in homes in the UK fluctuated. However the main trend was upward, from 30% in 1996/1997 up to 70% in 2002/03. Although mobile phone started at the lowest level, but the noticeable going up over the period helped mobile phone appropriated the second level and approached the CD player access rating.
Generally speaking, the patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK increased during from 1996/97 to 2002/03, but development speed was different with each technology.

 

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Chị ơi e nộp bài ạ. maihanh1991 - E55


As we can see, there are more and more households in UK access modern technology. According to the graph, the percentage of mobile phone increases the most remarkable. In 1996 – 1997, only about 18% homes in the UK had mobile phone but in 2002- 2003, this number rose to nearly 65%.
Interner is also a technology that made noticeable changing pattern in homes in the UK. The percentage of Internet access suddenly increased from around 10% to approximately 45% only in 4 years ( from 1998 – 1999 to 2002 – 2003 ).
Besides, the trend for CD player anf Home computer was lightly upward from 1996 – 1997 to 2002 – 2003 rose from about 60% to more than 80% and from 24% to 56% respectirely. That means currently the number of household which own CD player and home computer still increased.