Hà Nội: Mời các bố mẹ HỌC TIẾNG ANH ONLINE cùng Mrs. ThuyED (^_^)

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  1. TamPo1511

    TamPo1511 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Chí Tâm E49 gửi chị bài speaking ah :)
    http://www.mediafire.com/?zmnaakmjy337jhz

    The electronic gadget I like to use is a popular device in our lives. It is mobile phone of mine. Its shape is rectangle and it’s about 1 centimeter thick, and it has a black shell –the color I like most. Every day, the first thing I do is switch off the alarm in it and from that , I have to use it many times in day, Maybe I can say that it is the indispensable thing in my life because it helps me in a lot of work. Example when I need to contact to someone, the first I think about is to use mobile phone and search the one I need in my contact. When I need to relax, I can play games or listen to music in my best playlist or I can use a software in it to update the news on Internet. Many people often complain to me that they must pay a lot of money to use it, but I don’t, I use it very much but I don’t have to pay much of money because I don’t call or send message a lot .In the future the electronic device I think will be popular is “The tablet” like iPad because it is handy and easy to carry but still fully functional
     
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    HanaKim Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Trần Như Hoa E49 nộp bài speaking chị nhé~ ^^

    http://www.mediafire.com/?7tu7hi4rm2dhhzk

    Describe a electonic gadget you like to use
    Well, as you can probably guess, mobile phone is the most useful electronic gadget I love to use. And I need to start of by pointing out that my cell phone is named Nokia 5233, one of the common mobile phone in my country. My cell phone not only has an operating system and a touchscreen but also integrated many features. Although Nokia 5233 is not very slim, it is still elegant with the combination of sliver and white colour. I have to use my cell phone everyday with many purpose and I couldn’t image a day without it because it is compared as my timetable and my entertainment world. It is Obviously handy due to the fact that I can easily send message.. access internet, listenning to music, write diary and connect with my friends on Facebook.Another point I could add is that it is valuable to me because my parents give its for me as a present for my birthday. My life would be harder without it and I think that along with the development of society, in the near future, the world will be witnessed the fastest development of the mobile industry.
     
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    nomark912 Thành viên mới

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    em Q. Khánh E 51 nộp bài speaking chị nhé :

    http://www.mediafire.com/?y7zx7gfiuh0vh7j


    Art was born very long time ago, when people had known using simple instruments to create them. Going through no end of historical events, the great works of art existed till the present with the reputation of their author. In which, I really keen on the painting of Leonardo Da Vinci, the Mona Lisa. I remember that I watched it in a program on television for many years and my father has hang the print of it in living room of my house.

    Everyone will be agreed if The Mona Lisa is the world’s most famous painting. This painting is owned by the French government and hangs in the Louvre in Paris. I was impressed in the first view, there is a beautiful lady named Mona lisa, that is same name of work. She has a long hair and chubby stature. Looking on her eyes, we can see the brilliant belief about life, optimism and a lot of fun. The most special point is her smile. It is often described as an enigmatic smile. I suppose that it has an interesting secret.

    In conclusion, art helps me relax after stressful work. It makes my life so romantic, interesting and peaceful. It is really important for me.

    the end :D
     
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    Em Phương Duyên e 51 gửi chị bài speaking

    Speaking: talk about an important building in your city.
    Well, I’d love to tell you about the Opera House in Hanoi centre. You might not know this but Opera House is one of the most famous tourist area in my capital as well as But tower, Van Mieu Quoc Tu Giam and Tran Quoc pagoda. Because of the convenient location like near Hoan Kiem lake and Trang Tien plaza, Opera House attracts a lot of travellers. I suppose if I had to describe Opera House, the first thing I would say is that Opera House is a very beautifull building in Hanoi centre. In fact, it was built by French to serve the entertainment demand of resident. An interesting point about Opera House is that it is a small version of an Opera in Paris. Nowadays, Opera House still keeps an important role because it is where The Hanoi organizes some meetings or ceremony. Well, this area, itself is a location that called “Cach Mang thang Tam square” where occurred many important historical events. Therefore, it’s very necessary to protect this historical building to remind the young generation about the major services of old generation to protect my country.
     
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    thuy_ed Thành viên tích cực

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    UPDATE THÔNG TIN KHAI GIẢNG LỚP THÁNG 11/2011:

    LỚP DỊCH THUẬT (E56):
    · Thời gian học: 5.30-7.00pm thứ 3 & 10.00-11.30am thứ 7
    · Thời lượng: 03 tháng
    · Dự kiến khai giảng: 08/11/2011
    · Học phí: 3.700.000 VND
    · Miêu tả khóa học: Đây là khóa học DỊCH cực kì đầy đủ, chuyên nghiệp, phong cách bởi:
    - Học viên được hướng dẫn tỉ mỉ các phương pháp, kiến thức từ cơ bản – nền móng của dịch thuật tới dịch chuyên nghiệp
    - Học viên được thực hành dịch thuật chính xác, hoàn hảo cho series dịch chuyên đề kinh tế & xã hội
    - Học viên được hỗ trợ tư liệu dịch tất cả các loại văn bản trong đời sống và thương mại
    - Học viên có cơ hội ôn tập lại các chủ điểm ngữ pháp tiếng Anh và luyện tập khả năng viết & dựng câu chuẩn.
    · Lưu ý: Đây là khóa học ngắn hạn, không áp dụng chế độ bảo lưu. Học viên đăng kí phải xác định theo học trọn vẹn, trường hợp học viên tự ngưng học khi lớp chưa kết thúc, học viên chấp nhận mất số học phí còn lại.


    UPDATE THÔNG TIN KHAI GIẢNG LỚP THÁNG 11/2011:

    LỚP DỊCH THUẬT (E56):
    · Thời gian học: 5.30-7.00pm thứ 3 & 10.00-11.30am thứ 7
    · Thời lượng: 03 tháng
    · Dự kiến khai giảng: 08/11/2011
    · Học phí: 3.700.000 VND
    · Miêu tả khóa học: Đây là khóa học DỊCH cực kì đầy đủ, chuyên nghiệp, phong cách bởi:
    - Học viên được hướng dẫn tỉ mỉ các phương pháp, kiến thức từ cơ bản – nền móng của dịch thuật tới dịch chuyên nghiệp
    - Học viên được thực hành dịch thuật chính xác, hoàn hảo cho series dịch chuyên đề kinh tế & xã hội
    - Học viên được hỗ trợ tư liệu dịch tất cả các loại văn bản trong đời sống và thương mại
    - Học viên có cơ hội ôn tập lại các chủ điểm ngữ pháp tiếng Anh và luyện tập khả năng viết & dựng câu chuẩn.
    · Lưu ý: Đây là khóa học ngắn hạn, không áp dụng chế độ bảo lưu. Học viên đăng kí phải xác định theo học trọn vẹn, trường hợp học viên tự ngưng học khi lớp chưa kết thúc, học viên chấp nhận mất số học phí còn lại.

    LỚP PERFECT YOUR ENGLISH (E57):
    · Thời gian học: 5.30 – 7.00pm thứ 2 & 6
    · Thời lượng: 5 tháng
    · Dự kiến khai giảng: 11/11/2011
    · Học phí: 6.100.000 vnd
    · Miêu tả khóa học: Đây là khóa học chi tiết, bài bản, hệ thống toàn bộ các kiến thức, kĩ năng cần thiết cho học viên muốn đạt trình độ tiếng Anh tốt nhưng bị hổng, yếu từ gốc rễ.
    Trong khóa học, GV cung cấp cho bạn kĩ năng phát âm chuẩn ngay từ đầu, kĩ năng sử dụng TA giao tiếp đúng phong cách bản xứ, hệ thống ngữ pháp hoàn hảo, nhấn mạnh vào nghe – nói và tập từ từ, từng bước kĩ năng viết. Ngoài ra, đây là khóa tiền đề rất cần thiết cho học viên muốn ôn thi IELTS nhưng chưa đủ tự tin.
    · Đối tượng nên chọn khóa học này:
    - Những người mới dừng ở Tiếng Anh phổ thông (mức từ vựng vừa phải, ngữ pháp mới biết phổ quát) nhưng hướng tới muốn ôn thi IELTS thì đây là khóa FOUNDATION cực kì hữu dụng
    - Những người đã học rất nhiều nhưng vẫn loay hoay chưa tìm ra giải pháp cải thiện vốn tiếng Anh của bản thân
    - Những người đi làm lâu ngày không sử dụng tiếng Anh – quên quên nhớ nhớ và nay muốn làm 1 cuộc Cách mạng!
    Nói chung là những người muốn làm hoàn hảo cho kiến thức + kĩ năng tiếng Anh của mình ngay từ gốc rễ, có quyết tâm tạo ra hẳn 1 sự thay đổi thì nên chọn khóa học này!
    Trong khóa học, giáo viên sẽ hướng dẫn bạn tỉ mỉ như hình thức học gia sư vậy J

    UPDATE THÔNG TIN KHAI GIẢNG LỚP THÁNG 12/2011:


    LỚP PERFECT YOUR ENGLISH + IELTS FOUNDATION: (Lớp mã E58)
    ƯU ĐIỂM CỦA KHÓA HỌC: Vì sao bạnnên chọnkhóa học này?
    * Giúp bạn lấy lại từ gốc rễ kiến thức Ngữ pháp– Phát âm – Từ vựng – Thaotác dịch thuật cơ bảntrong tiếng Anh
    * Là khóa họcchuẩn mẫu cho đối tượng ôn thi Cao học &Nghiên cứu sinh
    * Là khóa học kĩ năng dìu dắt những ngườibắtđầu học ôn IELTS
    * Là khóa họchiệu quả, học viên sẽ học dướisự nghiêm khắc của GV kiểm tra, đôn đốc, thu bài vở hàng ngày, kết hợp học và chữa bài online


    Lớp mã E58
    * Thời gian học: 4.30-6.30pm thứ 7 & Chủ Nhật
    *Dự kiến khai giảng: 10/12/2011
    *Thời lượng khóa học: 5 tháng
    *Học phí: 8.100.000 VND (gồm học phí 5 tháng học trực tiếp cùng GV trên lớp + các đơn vị học Writing & Speaking online + giáo trình)

    Lớp IELTS TARGETBAND 7 + (Mã: E59)
    ƯU ĐIỂM CỦA KHÓA HỌC: Vì sao bạn nên chọn khóa học này?
    * GV cung cấp tất cả kĩ năng làm bài thi từng kĩ năng thànhphần trong kì thi IELTS
    * GVluyện tập cho HV nói trôi chảy, phát âm chuẩn, như phongcách người bản xứ
    * GVcùng HVthực nghiệm, chia sẻbài viết IELTS
    * GV cùng HV luyệntập làm các đề thi IELTS cậpnhật nhất
    * GV cung cấp cho HV theoyêu cầu nguồntài liệu ôn thi IELTS dồi dào, phong phú nhất

    Lớp mã E59:
    * Thời gian học: 7.30-9.00pmthứ 2&5; 10.00 - 11.30amChủ nhật
    *Dự kiến khai giảng: 12/12/2011
    *Thời lượng khóahọc: 5 tháng
    *Học phí: 9.100.000 VND (gồm học phí 5 tháng họctrực tiếp cùngGV trên lớp + các đơn vị học Writing& Speaking online + giáo trình)




    ĐỂ GHI DANH VÀO LỚP HỌC:
    Các bạn vui lòng qua đóng học phí trực tiếpvới GV: cô Thuy_ED tại địa chỉ lớp học: 103-khu 18- Ngõ 108 Lò Đúc – HN (trước khi qua các bạn hẹn trước qua ĐT để tránh vào giờ dạy của GV)
    hoặc
    chuyển khoản qua TK của GV: TK Techcombank Hà Nội: 14024431228016 hoặc TK GP bank (NH dầu khí toàn cầu): 1020010009173 - chủ TK: Nguyễn Phương Thùy (sau khi CK, các bạn nhắn tin vào ĐT của cô giáo tên đầy đủ, số ĐT, đ/c email của người học).
    Chú ý: Tất cả các lớp nhận những học viên đăng kí = đóng học phí sớm nhất và không nhận thêm khi lớp đã đủ sĩ số.
    Cảm ơn sự quan tâm theo dõi của các bạn! Hy vọng được học cùng các bạn với tinh thần hợp tác ^^
     
  6. okita273

    okita273 Thành viên tập sự

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    Huhu, chi oi, bi h em moi gui chi bai record. Sáng nay mới đc mượn bạn đc cái mic ạ. :(
    Chị sửa giùm em nhé. Phương Duyên e 51 ạ. Bài speaking
    http://www.mediafire.com/?z52e5jcvszaa7qn
    Speaking: talk about an important building in your city.
    Well, I’d love to tell you about the Opera House in Hanoi centre. You might not know this but Opera House is one of the most famous tourist area in my capital as well as But tower, Van Mieu Quoc Tu Giam and Tran Quoc pagoda. Because of the convenient location like near Hoan Kiem lake and Trang Tien plaza, Opera House attracts a lot of travellers. I suppose if I had to describe Opera House, the first thing I would say is that Opera House is a very beautifull building in Hanoi centre. In fact, it was built by French to serve the entertainment demand of resident. An interesting point about Opera House is that it is a small version of an Opera in Paris. Nowadays, Opera House still keeps an important role because it is where The Hanoi organizes some meetings or ceremony. Well, this area, itself is a location that called “Cach Mang thang Tam square” where occurred many important historical events. Therefore, it’s very necessary to protect this historical building to remind the young generation about the major services of old generation to protect my country.
     
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  7. wonemo

    wonemo Thành viên rất tích cực

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    Em Hoang Kim Chi - E54 nộp bài Writing unit 2 (task 2)

    History to some people could be not very interesting and studying the subject will not help to understand the value of modern world. However, it is generally believed that learning from the past can provide important skills and knowledge that we need for our modern lives and not teaching history to children might cause several negative impacts on them.

    To begin with, the most important point of studying the past is that learning about other historical periods gives insights into different ways of life. In particular, we can have some ideas of how people lived in different periods in the past: how they did the agriculture and what forms of transportation which were most common used in different periods.


    Next, learning about conflicts in the past can help us to avoid them in future. History texts provide explanations for the situations which caused conflicts in past. Hence, studying history helps to prevent most of the factors that may lead to fights in future. Similarly, if the situations we face today are identical to those happened in the past, we could have explanations and probably solutions for them.


    As the final point of the significances of studying past events, it is generally believed that studying history involves investigating and interpreting evidences or information hence critical thinking is developed. As a consequence, if children are not taught history at school, they might have lack of ability to collect and evaluate data and to think logically in order to make good decisions. In addition, if children are not given some interesting assessments like going to a local archaeological site to make a poster about local history, they would have no motivation or interest on doing research in later years of their lives.


    To sum up, despite the fact that there are some people might think studying the past is boring and useless as it brings little value to modern life, I strongly think that it is not just important but almost compulsory for us to study history as it helps to develop critical thinking skills and doing research skills which are two very important skills that we need for living and working.
     
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  8. wonemo

    wonemo Thành viên rất tích cực

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    hình như cô chưa chữa bài writing unit 1 cho lớp E54 đúng ko ah :-/
    em toàn nhận được email của lớp E55 thui :-?
     
  9. nghanh

    nghanh Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Anh Nga E 51 nộp bài speaking online

    Talk about an important building in your town/city
    Hanoi capital has many valuable buildings are historically significant as well as trade. In this article, I want to mention one of them that is the headquarters of the State Bank of Vietnam.
    It is located in the centre of The Capital, at 47 Ly Thai To Street that far from Hoan Kiem Lake only 500m.
    This is the main building of the former colonial regeme. It was buit before the revolution in August 1945 when Vietnam is a semi-feudal colony under French colonial rule.
    Monetary system, bank credit was established and operated primarily in this office for serving the colonial policy of France in Vietnam.
    It was designed by France architectural model.
    After the Vietnamese government being independence fully, the building has been used as the National Bank of Vietnam since 1951. Since there, its architecture virtually no changes, especially in appearance.
    About the trading significal, the building is the place where management and administration of its policies on the national currency of Vietnam. Therefore, this building plays an important role in the economy of Vietnam.
    Because of these importance fuctions, it is actually protected very strict and always tighten security both inside and outside.
    Over the historical period, this building remains an important position by its using value as well as its historical.
    One more particularly is, the image of the building is printed in some kinds of the currency of Vietnam.
    From the importance divisions as mentioned above, the building is known by many countries in the world, so, there are many tourists from other countries to travel to Vietnam to visit it.

    http://www.mediafire.com/?8syon26s6dclaxa
     
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    nghanh Thành viên tập sự

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    Em Hạnh E 51 gửi bài speaking online

    In Viet Nam, every child in primary and secondary school, they have to study art, and I am, too. You may not know that i had not talent for drawing, so i hate it. However, my cousin like art, he painted many pictures. I often look at the pictures he painted and i like it. In 2004, my family had been built a new house, when the house was completed, he gave my family a picture by himself. That is a beautiful landscape. That is a painting of the countryside, with the village beside the river as a sun of afternoon session. A peacful village was painted on canvas with pigment. It is not really outstanding as of the famous painting but it is a memory of my life. Thus it is important to me. At the moment, it was old but still very nice and I like it very much.

    http://www.mediafire.com/?a9didg1fcu7rimc
     
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    em Trần Thị Mỹ Hạnh lớp E54 gửi bài Writing Unit 2 task 2 ah....

    Nowaday, when life become more and more civilized, there are many people who are most of young people seem forget or aren’t interested in history. It’ll be very serious if history is forgotten. So, how is importance of history and what will happen when the children haven’t knowledge about history?

    Most of children dislike history in school. This could be because history is difficult subject. such as there are too many historical people or events to remember. In addition, it may be studying methods which are not true or suitable with them. If history is not taught in school, the children don’t know about their country and people. For example, they don’t know when their country was found, how many wars it passed to seize power and how many people laid down for motherland. Hence they might be not proud of their nation, don’t respect what forefathers built. Futhermore, historical lessons, historical experiences are important to apply to present conditions. On other hand, if they understand history, they will love their motherland, compatriot. However, if they don’t learn history, when they grow up, they will think history has a few value in the new world. Certainly I would definitely say that history is difficult subject but it is very important. This might be because history provides the knowledge about cultures, people, countries as well as historical events. Example, the inventions are in the past. Because of these inventions, the life becomes more and more comfortable and convenient. To add to this I study history to show love of my country and gratitude with forefathers
    This end my report here.
     
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  12. Blue.Moon

    Blue.Moon Mèo Moon

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    Em Huyền Trang E54 nộp bài

    Writing exercise 2: Task 2 – unit 2

    People said that: “no one bathed two times on a river” it means that the history never happens again, but the present is made by the history so researching and learning are very important.
    First of all, we learn history to know what happen in the past. Uncle Ho – a big father of our country had written in a poem that: “our citizens must know our history – to clear our motherland Vietnam country”(*). Furthermore, learning from the past you can learn many experiences, and it’s really beneficial when you make grave decisions.
    Secondly, learning history of other countries you can know about their tradition and culture, this is also an important condition to start international relationships.
    Nevertheless, nowadays, children might not like learning history, they contend that study about the past isn’t as interesting as sciences, badly, some pupil parents forbid their children learning history because “history can’t earn money”… It is an incorrect awareness, children must be taught history to know that they are really happier than in the past and what they should do not only to deserve with the sacrifice of pre ceding people not also to protect and develop present. By the ways, we must change our teaching method like take the children to the historical place or learning history by story,… Anyways, this will make the children interested in history.
    To sum up, history can teach you many thing. Learning from the past to let the present more better. That why, in my opinion I think studying history is very important and children must be taught it.
    (*): “Dân ta phải biết sử ta
    Cho tường gốc tích nước nhà Việt Nam…”
    – trích Việt Quốc sử diễn ca – Hồ Chí Minh
     
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  13. dohoaquynh

    dohoaquynh Thành viên tập sự

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    Em là Đỗ Hoa Quỳnh lớp E54 nộp bài writing task 2:
    To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history?
    What do you know about my country, my nation, the world? Before You were born, many things had happened, this you never saw. Therefore, the learning and researching historical is very important with all of people.
    Firstly, we learn history to know about my country, my nation. We have over 4000 years building and defending the country, with the cultures of ancient. If we don’t learn history, we will forget the roots of the country, the national heroes. For example: Ly Thuong Liet with the Deity poem, Ngo Quyen with the battle on the Bach Dang river, the struggle against French and American. Uncle Ho wrote: “People must know our history, to understand the course of Vietnam country”. We need to know Vietnam, where we are living, working and we can be a part of history.
    Secondly, history of the other country is as important as domestic country. We must take care of cultural of national and must investigate human culture. My country is a developing country, we should study the development of the world.
    But in fact, nowadays, children don’t like learning history and don’t memory history. Because they don’t know benefit of history, they don’t think that it is interest. History helps children accumulating experience of their life, improving skills. In a scientific research in 2011 about successful business in the USA, most of them have a deep understand of the country’s history and humanity. Therefore, children need to learn history, this helps to their success in the future.
    Summary, the history brings many things, teaches us many skills and lessons in our life. So why don’t we research history?
     
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  14. primroseht

    primroseht Thành viên tập sự

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    Em là Nguyễn Phương Thảo lớp E54, em nộp bài writing task 2 ạ.

    There is anyone said that : " The past never passes". A person who doesn't have past also likes he lost his mind. So, I think studying the past is not only important, but also very essential to everyone.

    As we know, the past includes history, things and events which took place ago and ago. If the past makes the chidhood for children, this also lets we know about the history, cultural, basic of development, etc… of a country. Can you imagine that a child grows up without any basic knowledges, such as: who he is, what his country is, and how it changes until nowadays… It's so dangerous. So i think there may be bad effects if the children are not taught history. To make this point more clearly, i will give you three realevant reasons. Firstly, history is formally a basic subject for all children in all countries when they are old enough to go to school. Moreover, history involves in all other subjects. For example, to learn liturature, you need to know the story of the writer's life, and what the source of such a poem tendency is… So, loss of history also means losing the basics of all the subjects. Secondly, history teachs children about the cultual and tradition. This makes the specialty and characteristic of each country. I can tell you a real situation of a Miss Beauty when she attended the cultural festival in a foreign country. That night she was so gorgerous in a "Shanghai-shirt" of China. However, the reason raises the conflict among people is that she comes from Vietnam, which is famous for "Long-shirt", while she wore a traditional costume of another country, especially in a cultural festival, where everyone wants to show international friends its own country. This is not only a lesson for her, but also for all of us, to be more careful in well-equipping history knowleadge. Finally, learning history will give the children a healthy and useful lifestyle. Instead of having a weak standard of knowledge about everything around, children can be motivated to discover the new things, new people, new countries, along with their own country. Therefore, they will be more proud of what their country did in the past, and gain more knowledges of international cultuals.

    That's why I say the shortage of history among children nowadays is very dangerous. However, I believe that once history can be taught in a serious, strict, and interesting manner in school, the children will see the important of it.
     
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  15. hohieu_vt

    hohieu_vt Thành viên tập sự

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    Em là HỒ TRUNG HIẾU E54. Em nộp bài writing task 2 ạ

    As the society changes and develops day by day, people seem to deeply concentrate on building their own life and forget the past :" why we have full life today?". This way of living also causes bad effect to young children, making them unrealise the value of the past in modern world. To illustrate this point, we will together go through some following relevant facts.

    On the contrary to wrong attitude of some people, the past always exists on our today, even my future life.If we don’t respect the past, we also find no way to build our future firmly. So I think, firstly, children need to be taught history to know basic knowledges, such as their family,their childhood, their country… For instance, I’m sure that no child wants to grow up without wondering how their country and people around had changed until they were born. It helps them understand the current times by going back into the history and knowing what event of history triggered certain changes Secondly, and more seriously, a child who grow up without being taght history may get trouble in behavior than others. They lose any sense of connection with the culture of their parents. They tend to have to learn lessons again the hard way that history is able to reach. One effect, for example, is the current tendency to prefer “security” over “freedom” in the US and elsewhere around the world. History teaches that is a bad trade to make, and can result in dictatorial “leadership”, genocide, and worse. The last but not least,
    Children should be taught history because this is “the subject of all subject”. The reason I say that is because it may help the student ,like mathematics or science, a bit more if they understood the history behind it. Believe it or not, everything has a history and students should understand this. At the same time, should the student not be interested in history, then at least they will have heard something about what has happened before their time and somewhere down the road they might decide that it is important and that they should study it more often.

    In conclusion, Children, even as young as six or seven, can be taught history in easier ways then can be imagined. Not only teachers, but parents should be teaching their children what is important in life and it is possible that the first place to start is to teach them history.
     
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  16. ManhCuong247

    ManhCuong247 Thành viên tập sự

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    Em là Lê MạnhCường E54 . Em nộp bài Writing task 2 ạ!

    Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that “Do the people need to study history ?” A majority of people believe to studying history is importance. However , there are also some people have the idea that studying the past has tiny worth in the present. From my own perspective, studying history is really important with everybody and specially is the children.

    There are numerous reasons why I hold this opinion, and I would explore a few of the most important ones here. The first, the past can often provide explanations for the situations we face today. For example, the man learn economics, he should know the cause of retrograde economy. As a result, it will help his work so much. Another reason why I prefer the argument is that learning about conflicts in the past can teach us how to avoid them in future. For instance, the bus is late you can't go to study on time because the bus is late so you know the best way is to go to the school by motorbike. It might also be noted that some children don't like studying history. As a result, they will don't study history so they also don't know the past and may be they won't collect skills for their life. This make their life is so hard.


    From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that the part is very importance with everybody.
     
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  17. dungfon

    dungfon sapphireblue^^

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    Em là : KIM TUYẾN
    Lớp : E54


    Along with the development of society , more and more problems are brought to our attention , one of which is that learning history . We all know , human have developed now have undergone severe historical ups and downs . Undeniable that the important of history for today modern world is extremely large.

    Firstly, history is the process of unification , the rise of human society , from past to present and future .Historical research is not only about events
    but also the cultural values , human values . History also help us to know the source and origin of the formation of human , that are the important events related to the struggle and preserve the national independence took place over the last few thousand year history .

    Next , let’s find out the benefits of studying history . Indeed , the benefits of today ‘youth are neglected it . Then , history is a noble personality , morality and humanity of the world , contributing to the formation of human qualities . It’s active participation in social life , fostering the development of emotional , dialectical thinking about science education and it was patriotism , loyalty to the country’s ethnic . Children learn from early history to understand the important history events of our country they will be pround of their country and sence of responsibility towards the perspective of a country . Actuary ,determine proper importance and benefits of history helps us understand better why to learn history . It is not only a proper understand past , but also help us better action in the present and future .

    From what has been discussed above , we may finally draw the conclusion that teaching history for children is very important and necessary in today’s modern world .
     
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  18. dungfon

    dungfon sapphireblue^^

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    Nguyễn Thị Thùy Dung
    Lớp E54


    Task 2

    Today, with the rapid development of human society: more modern, more civilized
    learning about the past essential and important for everyone.

    First, we need to know what the past is? Well as you know, The past is historical events, issues, everything that happened and never come back but it is the present value. In that sense, it can be the past of an individual man, a family's past, an organization’s past ... or the past of a country.

    Whether you are, whether you came from, understanding the history and culture of the nation and your country is essential as it not only provides information about the events took place in past but also help you understand the value of the good traditions of his people, help you to complete personality, then more honor, pride, and thereby has the sense of preserving and protecting the priceless heritage that.. Furthermore, Can say that to succeed in any field that you have to understand history. For example, you as an businessman, you want to set up a company in any one place, you need to understand the cultural history of the land and the people in that place, to meet the needs their needs. If you do that, you will be succeded in haft.

    As you already know, the importance and benefits of studying history for each one was great, but today, many children do not understand this, even studying history is a big fear of them. It’s a sad situation and undesirable as understanding the past will help children to look deeper into different ways of life, providing the expertise to solve the same problems that they face in the present and the future. Besides, studying history involves investigation and interpretation, so its study develops thinking skills of children.

    Yet I am one of many people who feel that teaching history for children is very necessary and important; to do this, we should have more good way to teach the children and give them love in history.
     
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  19. kevohon

    kevohon Thành viên tập sự

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    em- Nguyễn Tuấn Anh E 54 nộp bài writing task 2:
    As sociently development, people are attraching much importance to the part, well to be honest, it is relevant to modern world and human usually finds out about history cause of reasons then :
    The firstly, the past con often provide explantion for the situation today, ofr instance political history studies international relations,race riots, war…
    The secondly, studing other historial period gives insight into defferent ways on life. For example, sometime history repeats itself, in point of fact, Events have cycle as natural disaster, economic regression, so people can forecast in the future.
    The thirdly, studing history provides knowledge, human civilizations is made by the time so people inherit achievemement or experience of the past
    So learning about the past is useful with modern.However children are not taught history this will lead to the past forgetten it mean that the present is not real and the future is never come.
     
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  20. Nguyễn Hồng Hạnh

    Nguyễn Hồng Hạnh Thành viên tập sự

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    em Nguyễn Hồng Hạnh - E55 nộp bài writing task 1: "The diagram below shows how salt is removed from sea water to make it drinkable. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant."


    The picture describes the process of water filter from seawater.

    First of all, the seawater is entered filter system by means of supply-pipe. From this, water is processed and eliminates dirty substances what after are returned to sea. At the next stage of the process, the first water is continued at pre-treatment filter where forced through membrane at high pressure. Following that, it is moved impurities and harmful substances, clean water molecules is gone through membrane to continue process and concentrated substances are returned to sea. These are then posted treatment with lime, chlorine and fluoride which converts it into drinkable. The drinkable subsequently is used to store in storages. The last process, it is integrated water supply system.

    The water is cleaned and could be employed because impurities and harmful substances are removed and it is maken to drinkable. After process, these are distributed everywhere to adopt conduit system to serve demand of people.
     
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